On the Third Rewrite of Talla's Temple Torn (Patreon)

The first chapter is the hardest to get right.

Starting 200 Dollars was relatively easy.  (It's all like "Ooh, wanna spank me?".  "Sure, babe.")

Getting the characters all tied back together again and all the little subplots.  Sheesh.

Okay, though, I think this will be the good version.