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In this Chapter, the demon becomes violent and our intrepid heroes hope to find a path to quell its tendencies.

As always, let me know what you think.  I'm ever eager for your opinions.  Am I hitting enough of a note of creepiness?  Because I've never tried this sort of thing before.

Cheers,Xavier.

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Jacob Seidel

I'm enjoying it, and the creepiness is there, especially with Sally's strange acceptance of the situation. Not sure how creepy you're going for, but it's not the most unsettling thing I've read by a long shot. Having the friends act in a reasonable manner is satisfying for me also.