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Chapter 3, ladies and gentlemen.

Laura and Bailey, having survived the "special spankings", which Bailey has yet to place in her notebook, so we don't know what they're really called yet, are engaged in trying to make every go-round a little more interesting than the last.

Laura, with specific needs, makes a new Bargain and Bailey discovers something about her relationship with Laura.

Cheers,

Xavier.

P.S. if you have a good name for the "special spankings" let me know in the comments.

Comments

Jeff O

Monsieur Xavier, I think that this chapter might be the best of all of the $200 world. Your storytelling is reaching new heights, and I’m looking forward to the future updates. Cheers!

Jeff O

Yikes, I almost forgot to tender my suggestion: Tandem Spanks

Nafai

I like the sound of tandem spanks, but I think they are more of a proxy spanking or maybe a Chinese whisper spanking. I think proxy applies, since he spanks one to have it passed on to the next. However, since the girls intentional get the spankings wrong, you could also view it as a kind of Chinese whisper, as the end of the "story" doesn't match the start.

Nafai

Now that I have thought about it some more, I think you should keep "special spankings" as the name until at after they have started with them the first time. That way the girls are surprised by what is going to happen until they start. I’m sure that you will be introducing new types of spankings or additions and/or modifications to the existing types of spankings. Kent could use "special spankings" as code for some new types of spankings, after which they could get a cool new name.

L. Lingula

Well, that was quite the chapter. What a pair these two ladies have morphed into over all of the chapters. Both reserved, virginal, and now? I don't know if either of them can say that anymore. What a good bit of the "boiling frog" character development over the timeline. What a great chapter!