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The Debtor's Corral (Patreon)

Published:
2023-06-06 17:57:55
Edited:
2023-06-06 19:35:32
Imported:
2026-06
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Just wrote this one yesterday and edited it this morning.

Some stuff I could never imagine Bailey and Laura doing, so it's a one-off short story of some kind of future dystopia where women can pay off their debts through a regulated system of sexual services.

Not sure if this is the kind of thing I normally put out there, but let me know if you like it.

Xav.

Comments

Wendell Gray

Any plans for a sequel to this?

xaviertorch
>>110247182

It's always possible. These are a little smoother, when the urge to write them strikes, than Talla's Temple or even a THD chapter. If there are enough likes, I guess I could build a little dystopian world. Would I follow Andrea? Deirdre and her husband? Take random episodes like Twilight Zone or CSI?

Jam

I enjoyed the story. It's nice and short, but well written and the world makes sense inside of it. I would recommend a reference to something similar to men, as it would not make sense to me for 50% of the population to not be exploited like the other half.

xaviertorch
>>110877264

Yeah, I mentioned it but hadn't thought it all the way through. I'm imagining some kind of religio-fascist gov't that wants to emphasize the pain and looks askance at the sex part. So men might just be sent off to the coal-and-asbestos mine-and-factory complex to be abused as short-lived human air filters. Don't know if I have a plan to really flesh out this world, though. -_O_-