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Time to get started on the next comic script: Wendy Wonka 2.7!!! which could very well be the conclusion to chapter 2 - (no promises)?

Characters to use:

"Tiny woman"- Nancy the gummi planned to use her as bait

"The Blonde"- Wendy views her as a version of her younger self. While high on a wallpaper-laced fertility gummi, Wendy imagines that the blonde girl wants to be her daughter.

Spirmi- has no arms now, and she hellbent on killing Wendy in the most painful way possible.

Gummi bear- mentions goose. She has become so obsessed with fulfilling her quest for revenge that she has obviously turned to the dark side. How do the oompa loompas react to her changed persona?

Charlie and Willy- Time to get out the ponchos and umbrellas. They are speeding up the process of accidents that will happen to "smoke Wendy out of the factory". They want her out of the factory. She can’t stay but she won’t leave on her own accord. Nobody wants to be the one to face her or tell her bad news.

Willy- Is hopeful for Wendy, he could never directly bring harm to Wendy because... (secret). He is afraid of Wendy.

Charlie- I can’t work with her, she tried to turn me into a chocolate bar!

Oompa Loompas- want their chocolate payment. Beginning to doubt this work relationship w gummi. Try to stall Wendy or slow her down in her dash to the age chamber.

Victim list of possibilities:

Maroon sweater: Giant boobs or butt (flesh) still swelling in the cheedough bakery

Blueberry caverns: giant blueberry still growing, still chewing!, still flooding juice into the sublevels and upward...

Cocoa Volcano set to maximum eruption: Naomi still stuck in the drain-funnel.

Marshmallow cream: Sierra is still filling up with marshmallow cream that has burst out of the room by now.

Melted ice cream: Dianne along with all the ice cream in the factory has melted and flooded the surrounding area.

Candy balloon girl- maybe some pink air hissing out of busted pipes. She has grown big enough to block ventilation ducts by now. The helium tanks are extremely flammable.

Andrea- pear-girl really looks like a pear now. She's more pear than woman now. Is she recued? Unlike Nancy, she actually knew where the chocolate stash was being kept.

Wynn and her mom: They were in the process of juicing Wynn. Wynn demanded her mother turn Zoe into a blueberry too... 

Ryan's mom: Was being kept in a makeshift nursery alongside the sour patch kids that Nancy gave birth to. Ryan is stored deep inside his mother at -20ish years old.


What, or who do you think is most important to see? 

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blueberrycowz

Now if only asking or in addition to the other victims here are my thoughts in order of who works and asking for clarification. 1. Ryan's mom: Assuming she is pregnant and in the nursery like you said up top and you have plans for Wendy's daughter approach, she should be the inclusion for whatever issue you put the blonde's part in. It would make sense and she could either be the surrogate sitter or if it goes the way i thought it would, then she and wend would make wonderful buddies if you know what I mean. 2. Naomi: Important with the Wonka story, it's where we left off and the chocolate volcano is going to need the gluttonous guzzler to have the connection, this is the arc I would include her in if you are putting their tale up front. 3. Wynn, her mom, and Brittany: An accident certainly for bait, they could easily get caught up in the sibling craziness or the plans of the two girls and use Wynn to effectively bowl or block Wendy from escaping. Perhaps the rogue blueberry girl accidentally crushes a naughty robot. Or maybe blueberry and pear meet, or perhaps blueberry sees blueberry and is scared dmeanding to not get that big. They are dynamic in their placement from the last issue and I think you can do much with them depending on whose story you were looking to complete. 4. Andrea: Confused because the side wall in the last part, around page 12 suggested that was her butt in the door, but will have to have you confirm. The one with the giantess rolling in the background. If you choose this, we might need to see who was in that door. Nancy could get egged on by her, now betrayed by Wendy she encourages to be a part of the plan to get back at her, or maybe the redemption of Wendy could be done with her arc. Plus see up top about her reuniting with fellow fruit girls. 5.Blueberry caverns: A place for one of the evil figures to fall into, or perhaps the time limit for the structure of the factory. The poor girl nursing to find wynn or andrea or destroying the foundation that it sort of releases the others is a big use, but otherwise, can't see her in this chapter and more of an epilogue 6. Sierra: Missing the marshmallow girl, but can't figure out where to tie her in other than another epilogue. Perhaps she could be the raft to sail on when the chocolate volcano erupts, or maybe if juice starts to flood? The Loompa could easily enjoy storing chocolate on her. 7. Melted Ice cream: Dianne. She is ready to go and they could do a lot of things with her. Perhaps she is running through the pipes and serves as sort of eyes and ears for Willy or Wendy? Maybe she is there to mix with chocolate and cool the volcano down, used by someone to stop Willy and Charlie? Maybe she is used to stop Nancy Woo or Spirmi sort of trapping them in a sticky blaze of glory? Or again another victim seen in epilogue. 8. Candy balloon girl: To me could be more of an escape mechanism. People using her to float to safety or maybe she is used again as a trap to block and corner people. 9. Cheedough girl: Hardest to envision at this point. She was just eliminated, and I can't see anything other than maybe breast feeding someone or just stuck. She's sort of a plot limiter and I think is more for another epilogue zoo, unless you want her to join the barn as a cheedougyh helper to give Brittany a hand. Or can Cheedoughs be milked. I think i covered them all. Let me know if any questions or if you like any

Groblek

I'd like to see Ryan's mom make a reappearance, and with the way the last comic left off, a trip to the Age Chamber seems like it's clearly in the cards for Wendy and The Blonde. It seems to me that it could make sense to find Ryan's mom there trying to get herself aged back up enough to rebirth Ryan, and she can be a way to let new readers (and maybe the Blonde) know what Wendy might be thinking of using the Age Chamber for. And of course, I'm personally hoping that someone gets regressed into someone else's womb, and I'm not picky about who it is. Though I think it would be fitting for it to be the result of everyone's plans not quite going the way they intended them to go in some fashion.

Shibuyasake

I like what you thought of for Dianne, would you envision her completely fluid? She'd def also make a great chocolate sundae (more fluid than normal ice cream) or mousse if she's to combine with the chocolate. What would be your opinion on Zoe as a blueberry cow and would you/ and how would you think this would fit into the story?

Kuro7

Me? I want to see Ryan's Mom again and she's still pregnant. and idea I have is maybe Wendy sees here on her way to the Age Chamber, still carrying The Blonde, and intends to regress The Blonde into her womb and be pregnant with her. Ryan's mom tries to warn Wendy not to do it and tries to remind Wendy that the effects of the Age Chamber make women pregnant permanently! That's just and idea.

blueberrycowz

Depends on the nature. I would say essentially definitely liquid, but ice cream is still going to be soupy and I think she would go well with whipping into something and being even more powerful or happy because she can stay consistent at large range of temperatures. That would be the really cool part of being flexible. As for Zoe. That's a bit harder to figure out storywise since right now you would have to find some way to get back to the farm, or in showing the chaos of the caverns girl breaking out and her juice pouring in, i could see him doing a famous sort of montage page for one and we see the juice seeping into like the edible room where the layer as a peep floats with some of the loompas on board, perhaps the balloon girl above the river forming in her room, and then to the barn where maybe Zoe drinks it and begins to turn blue like Wynn's mom or the recent brittany turning into a blueberry cow girl (the girl who was half cow). If you want Brittany to be the one, then because she is helping push Wynn, her mother (Penelope) would be right there and Wynn would be mad and demand her mother again not let the girl see her. Being the same woman and apologizing, Brittany would get a sample and being to turn blue. Or she slips and ends up getting something leaked on her resulting in well, her turning into a blueberry cow. That's how I could think right now into integrating both girls.

Shibuyasake

I would like that kinda closure for Dianne tbh. Really good ideas. As for Zoe I think the drinking of the cavern blueberry juice would make the most sense story wise. And it would also be ironic since she mistook the cow antidode with blueberry juice and now she would willingly drink blueberry juice. I think it would be great fun to see her react to the transformation to a blueberry cow since shes more on the feral side, both mentally and physically. But rather then just turing blue it would be amazing to see her rounding out and inflating, mooing confused in the process or becoming blissfully aroused. I could def see her in the epilogue being all blue and round on a meadow, or a juicing barn, producing blueberry milk. How do you think is she mentally wise? Completely cow, almost feral or is there still some zoe left in her? Brittany def needs some more changing thats for sure. But I would rather leave the blueberry cow state to Zoe. I am thinking more of Marshmallow Inflation

blueberrycowz

Again, we have to find a way to get the characters back to the farm. Given who the main elements are, that's the tricky part, but if the wayward cavern girl does push out or at least her juice then it can make sense to see her. I don't know why she would do it compared to the others, but perhaps there is not a stall for her yet and she is out in the fields and drinks and swells. Depending on the nature of the comic the way this is going to be is I think when we left her she is mostly in the natural state of the cow, but like all of the ones we saw in the barn, Okay made a great show of how many cows are giving Wendy the side eye. So I would think they have the ability to be still mostly with it, but have feral instincts take over like eating, and requiring milking as we saw with the one cow whose udder was hard like a wonka melon. If we did an epilogue perhaps her and wynn would be across from each other and she says she got her way, while Penelope and Brittany are tending to them respectively. I think that Brittany either needs to be a victim of Wynn given her help and wynn's pettiness, or leave it be until the next idea comes around so that somebody can help clean up the mess. But you have some fun ideas to definitely work into if he continues the series.

Tom Smith

If you can't take the Wendy out from the Factory, then I guess you take the Factory out from the Wendy? There are many ways to cause as much damage to the factory as possible so that Wendy can't stay there any longer, but personally my preference is seeing someone(s) expand large enough to cause this, so there's the giant blueberry in the flooded blueberry caverns getting too large for her subterranean confinement. Also, it might makes sense that the drainage from the juicing room normally goes down into the caverns, but with the flooding in the caverns, there is a reverse flow and any juice extracted from Wynn (and possibly more from the caverns) ends up back inside Wynn (and possibly her mother also). Naomi stuck in the Cocoa Volcano, Candy Balloon Girl and Sierra filling with marshmellow cream are other prime candidates for inflation-caused structural damage to the factory. Alternatively, Wendy could get her comeuppance as she is expanded into a huge mobile balloon/berry/whatever as she is filled with all the melted ice cream, blueberry juice, cocoa volcano overflow etc. Also a pear shaped Andrea would make for a suitable stopper/cork to stop someone from being deflated... You could have many parties contributing to the mayhem with: - Charlie and Willy knowingly causing accidents with their knowledge of the factory to add to the chaos; - the Gummi and the Oompa Loompa's running their scheme, but ultimately sabotaged by others' interference. The Oompa Loompa's in my mind are like mercenaries and be open to switching sides (possibly to Charlie & Willy) in order to obtain their chocolate payment. - The Blonde probably just want to get out of there with as many of her fellow interns & the incidental victims as possible, but probably also grabbing what they can and destroying anything that's standing in between her/them and the exit. - Spirmi, being AI/robot, would have the singular focus of getting back at Wendy and would most likely succeed.

Shibuyasake

I would Imagine a panel where a juice puddle forms on the meadow, Zoe Drinks it, the next Panel seing her crossing her eyes to wittness her snout turing blue and the last panel of the page seing her blue and inflating, yet not showing her final Form, which we would see in the epilogue where it would make an incredible page: Wynn grinning at Zoe, knowing that she got her wish, while Brittany milks/ juices Zoe, mooing annoyed bc she's worse Off than before. I like the idea of all the cows not being 100% feral, being more like dumbed down humans with cow instincts. *Edit: you're absolutely right, just took a look at 2.2, the cows def know whats up

Anonymous

To tell the truth, I never saw anyone biologically pregnant there, so I'm not particularly interested in following the squabbles there.

lardpunk

I'd like to see more of sierra

blueberrycowz

I like that panel a lot. Might be a bit hard to have the entire page dedicated to her with the whole comic story, but man or man the description make a great side story. I like the concepts a lot, but with all the characters coming up, there is only so much that can be done in an 18-20 page comic with cover. However, I love the sty.e and it was the cultured and strawberry cows that showed it to me. :)

Sonicrailin

So much to deal with . . . woo . . . but I might save this list of victims for my own little side story idea with a character of my own creation. He got sparked from all these goings on, so I might as well refine him with it, heheh.

Nevoki

Anything with butts!

Coomcheese

There are a lot of choices but i hope we see Andrea again. Feels like she just kind of gets left there so it would be cool to see her again and how her sitatution is progressing.

okayokayokok

Great ideas with some good small details that I think I might get to use as I'm filling in details on the page

Tom Smith

Cool! Looking forward to seeing who the chapter finale pans out! XD Also what happened to the immobile fatty that was the last tour group member "standing" in Ch. 1? Is she still stuck watching everything unfold on the bank of security screens?

Anonymous

Not completely sure about the whole cast, but I love the blueberry girls and would love to see them all return bigger than ever. If I remember correctly during an inking livestream some time ago you said they were struggling to juice Wynn with all the things going wrong at the factory, so perhaps she's only grown bigger and bigger since then and is in genuine peril of popping (we'll gloss over the fact the girl in the caverns is significantly larger). This could be Wynn's mother's motivation to find some unwitting rube to latch onto Wynn's nipple and drink away the excess juice and stop her daughter from bursting, or through a mishap of her own hubris ending up being the one having to drink and re-blueberrying herself in the process. So you've got two extremely large blueberries verging on exploding and a third growing beneath the factory itself. Wendy did say that Wynn's mother could destroy the factory alone if she got too large, this would be the equivalent of a blueberry nuke if left unchecked.

okayokayokok

oh yeah! incredible ideas- definitely want to use some of these! I am excited to write the wynn scene.

Shibuyasake

There can never be enough blueberries! Could especially be interesting if all the extra juice reacts with other victims (Dianne, Brittany, Zoe...)

Anonymous

I am interested in biological pregnancy (ideally pregnancy within marriage))). Magical/laboratory/surrogate pregnancies don't appeal to me, that's the reason why I rarely buy comics