AFTERDARK - ANIMATIC PASS (Patreon)

Hey guys! Please pardon the terrible line deliveries, I'm astonishing myself with how badly my vocal injury has limited my ability to act. Hopefully my crunchy scratch vocals are enough to convey the idea though. Before I move to cleaning up the boards, I want to ensure I've timed them out well. Here is pass 1.

I've included a timecode in the corner incase anyone has timing feedback for if a scene is too long or short. Timing is finicky! I've been looking at this all day so fresh eyes on this animatic are a blessing lol. Please enjoy the watch, and pardon my voice.