Brightening Miranda's Day (Patreon)

If you're following Elephant Town both here and a week later on Instagram, it's possible the latest update struck you as being a little sunnier than the originals I posted here a week ago. 

Coloring Miranda's pages has been a struggle for me, because getting the right melancholy feeling tends to make the pages look more muddy than golden.

By now you may have noticed that each character has their own line color and color scheme: Kris is a red-purple; Paul a cold blue; Berto a warm green; and Miranda... well, either gold or mud.

And maybe the mud is kinda appropriate to match her mood. But I think the perked-up versions help the characters stand out a bit more, and the book will probably need that saturation boost when it's printed on paper.

ANYWAY, I thought you might like to see the differences and judge for yourself. Curious to hear your thoughts, if you have any. :)

Edit: Oh, and thanks to your help with the second page, I altered the dialogue so the church ladies' entrance makes a little more sense!