Peter's Influence 1 (Patreon)

I started writing this a few days ago, sort of a different take on the premise of Favored Son (though I do change some lore), but with my recent work schedule progress has been slow and as I continued I saw this drifting into overly familiar territory. The 'dueling love interests' set-up at the end is the same thing as I've done in Hesper before, and I didn't have any fresh ideas for a bunch of guys getting fatter. Rather than force myself to plod along I decided to stop here for now. Maybe I'll come back when I have an interesting idea to continue this or wrap it up.