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Passing Love 2 | Page 24 | Process (Patreon)

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2021-02-16 22:46:39
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2026-06
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I've been dying to make Travis full-on cry for ages and I'm excited it's finally happening! Is that weird? I don't get to portray this emotion very often, if ever...

With dialogue-heavy pages like this, I get tempted to break it up into 2 pages so that it's not all so squeezed in there. I ran the risk of rushing the mood here, but I think it's reasonable to say that Travis has been holding in tears for a while now. And Joe's the perfect listening post for him to finally let it all out with someone!

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Gnardeaux

Crying is cathartic. Travis needs it. I'm glad Joe is there to help him.

Josh Redcliffe

Its not weird. This page is paced really well. Travis has had all this building up for ages so of course he's just gonna blurt it out. I hate that he has to be crying, but this is done so well!

High-bi password

Yeah, I feel like this really makes sense for the emotional height of the moment. He’s so stressed out and upset that he would be talking fast, and he’s also processing a lot of emotion since this is still VERY fresh for him and it’s really hurting him. So it actually makes more sense to see him cry after all of that emotion just collapsing out of him at once.

Tsarin

I think it worked really well. The pacing feels spot on!