Passing Love 2 | Page 44 | Process (Patreon)

My idea with the final three panels of this page is that you wouldn't see Travis's face, which would play into the next page's sequence of panels. But now that this page is finished, I think a shot of Travis's face would have been appropriate for the 6th panel. However, it's good to not dwell too much on what one could have done differently, because it's easy to fall into a trap of endlessly revising one's work, trying to chase perfection.

This is also a rare page where a character extends outside the outer border of the page. This is a complication because when preparing for print, extra space is required on all sides so that there is wiggle room for the sheet of paper being cut. And so, I did actually draw all of Joe's pinky... you just can't see it in this web version.