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[Beta-Reading] Love IRL - Chapter 1 (Patreon)

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2022-02-26 14:49:36
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2022-02
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Hi all <3

For those of you interested in reading the first chapter of my next story, here it is! I've set it up that you can leave comments in the google doc, or here on patreon. Either is fine ^^

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uVLYUW6FU5g8b2D0mxuxr9DvfJfraTZ2HLOt1j2yZms/edit?usp=sharing

If you like it, please tell me! <3

Comments

Tokpkj079

This is showing a lot of potential for a great story... i suggested a few graphical changes in the google doc if you are ok with that, if not i can take them down... but i liked it and can't wait for more

Katelynn Back

Ohhhh it’s already so good! So it’s set in your created universe 👌 which I find really awesome we still get that small magic element, but it’s so cute already 😭 I didn’t find anything wrong so far but I’m also bad at finding mistakes 😅

Toryx

I‘m already all in and so excited to read more. Most of the questions I had became crystal clear as I continued reading. There is only one thing I just about 85% sure of (but it could be explained by the fact that English isn’t my first language) I just thought if he was so important to tiger and tiger felt so close to him weren’t they friends and wouldn’t it be a pretty big reverence point for him to find out who tiger was? Or can’t he remember because he experienced things like that like in a regular base? I really like the story and it’s extremely promising ☺️

Toryx

Thank you. Yes now it’s clear for me and I’m so excited to read more. It’s such a great story with so much potential ☺️