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Page 83 (Patreon)

Published:
2020-05-21 10:01:00
Edited:
2021-01-22 18:58:32
Imported:
2026-06
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What a nice herd reunion... Not one sire in this comic qualify as likeable I guess, but this one might be the worst so far!

Kasko addresses him as chief, which is a less respectful version of sire. His name is Rokkus, although it's not relevant.

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Jussie

Oooooh... Did Rokkus just use a deer slur?? I can see why Kasko doesn't respect him. Hasn't even met Nero and Runi yet and already calling them names, the nerve! I kind of wish that Runi wasn't holding Nero back, but then, I have a feeling this new guy might be the one who inflicted Kasko's scars. I love the tension in this page!

boizois

Rok speaks the bastard language very fluently,,, good for him I love how you’ve portrayed the sires so far! Each of them is such a different shade of uppity and its great! 💕i cant wait to find out why Kasko is not a fan!

Spiritstrike

Loving Kasko more and more! He's only just met Nero and Runi and already he's hating that his sire is calling his new friends mean names. I love him!

Magophage

Gawd, I hate to be this person but here I go. I might be wrong but I'm pretty sure "for a like of you" is very much grammatically incorrect. Instead, I think, it should be "How fitting for the likes of you". Anyways! I'm loving this so far. I want to know moooorrreeee.

rattGS

Oh? My grammar checker said it's odd but works; many deer in the story talk with a small poetic twist.

Magophage

Idk man, just sounds off imo. If you'd like him to sound a little smarter, you could write it as "how befitting of the likes of you". Then again, I have to admit, I am very nitpicky with speech bubbles. For example I would've left out the article 'the' of Rokkus' first bubble as well, leaving it at "Sounds like you haven't picked up any manners since last time." Idk why but 'the' just implies to me that one should not end it on 'time' but instead write it as "the last time we spoke/met/etc.." But that might just be my own ocd speaking here. I often overthink my articulation and phrasing.