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Chapter 3: Bartholomew's Night [115-116] (Patreon)

Published:
2019-12-01 16:12:02
Edited:
2019-12-03 08:48:08
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2019-12
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RubitsArt (edited)

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2026-09-08 17:00 Some grammar suggestions (I hope this isn’t unwelcome): “It wasn’t on purpose” “and not because I didn’t want to” “That was not at all what I had to do!” or “That was not at all what I should have done!” “Although *sob* instead of that *sob* I should have *sob* been wiser *sob* and told you (etc)” This is a beautiful scene by the way. I am looking forward to seeing how the relationship between these two progresses.
2019-12-02 23:21

Snegovski

On the contrary - it's very welcome! Always! I changed these dialogs in the original language a bunch of times. As a result, the English version turned out to be chaotic >.< Thanks!