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WIP - Cucked by an Ex (Patreon)

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2022-12-17 08:56:21
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Heyo! Here's a WIP for my next cucking story, where a horse ends up cucked by his mouse boyfriend's elephant ex. Hoping to get this finished soon, but here's what I've got so far! ^^

-Arch ^^

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Basque

This is turning out nicely! You always do a great job with scenarios like this. Although, reading WIPs always feels like a cliffhanger - the best part so far was just getting started when the draft ended! You have a skill for conveying characters' emotions which really shows when Nate appears here, the way you conveyed his impact on Jace was fantastic. Really nice job with the descriptions of Nate and showing how Jace submits to him. One good detail was how you give agency to something other than the characters, like with the line "His dick was in control here." You also have a good vocabulary and make great use of descriptions like "domineering," "massively-endowed," and "intimidating." Great work so far! Also, impressed that you can accomplish so much writing in addition to your commissions. Looking forward to seeing how this turns out. Best of luck with all your writing!