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Harry Potter and the Shattered Ring Chapter 20 (A Fight of Bronze and Magic) (Patreon)

Published:
2025-04-01 21:04:25
Edited:
2025-12-28 09:40:30
Imported:
2026-06
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SKyqpW5Y5-LHErTmD0k1PPfQ3CnyKoR00sJLt-JJj6A/edit?usp=sharing

Comments

WeedLovingUxion

Hm, so my first thing to say is that the fight between Ordovis and Harry was really well, though imo, it dragged on a little bit too much and maybe this is a weird complaint but a few asspulls ngl. But hey, media has done way worse then what you did. Honestly, if I had to compare, it felt like something out of the Bleach Manga of just hanging on by a thread.

AMagicWriter

I understand Harry suddenly getting stronger might feel like an asspull, but it will be explained later why this happens, and it will be very costly for Harry.

WeedLovingUxion

I shouldn't have said asspull, that came across as negative. I guess more like...convenient is what I would say. I understand as the protag, Harry breaks rules, it's more like I expect these rules to break over time and not in one fight.