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Cody

Well what an excellent chapter first Hermione is falling to pieces around Andromeda and Bella is doing the same in her dreams for Hermione. Very interesting! Looking forward to what happens next

goopieoh

Finally! I’m so excited to read more of Andromeda, she is usually the forgotten sister. Also the way you are writing is amazing with her being a mix of her sisters (poised and elegant like Narcissa, with an air of formidableness like Bellatrix) while still being distinctly her own character (warm and gentle, but firm, intelligent and observant). I’m curious also about whom Andromeda is reminded of when she sees Hermione (poor girl, can barely think straight with a Black sister near her), maybe one of her sisters or Regulus? And I gotta say tha last scene was insane, so good, it definitely took me by surprise but I am no complaining. Seems Bella has a naughty secret, some very strong forbidden desires (the dynamic with her and Hermione was just chef’s kiss), a kink (well, someone’s gotta further the line of the house of Black and give it an heir, can’t wait for it to actually happen) and denial that is not even close to strong enough to mask her desires. Curious about her and Hermione, seems all the sisters have a connection with her. Anyway, what an awesome chap.