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Tony

This chapter felt short to me—not because it lacked substance, but because it moved so quickly through something really important. What stood out most was how communication within the couple is clearly breaking down. He’s confronting something that happened to him—something he can’t just undo or pretend didn’t matter. What happened in the alley was intense, especially for someone who’s never been with a guy before. That kind of experience can be overwhelming and disorienting. But then he comes home, and what Brooks does with him in the shower is different—it’s something he *actually wanted*. That contrast matters. Now he’s back with Emily, and it’s obvious he doesn’t really know what he wants. Or maybe more accurately, he knows on some level, but he’s afraid of where that truth is leading him. You can feel the pressure building—the tension between what he’s been telling himself and what his body and emotions are pulling him toward. That’s why this chapter feels a little insane in the best way. He’s standing at a crossroads, even if he doesn’t fully realize it yet. I can’t wait for the moment he finally calls Brooks. I’m really hoping he lets “Bible Girl” go and allows himself the space to explore what’s clearly forming with Brooks. That said, this is just how I’m reading it—and probably how many of us *want* it to go—but part of what makes the story compelling is not knowing. Let’s see where this takes us.

Devin

Good chapter, but he needs to dump bible girl Emily. His thoughts are too enthralled with the grease bags and his friends. But he needs to get past the anonymous sex with the nasties. You don’t know what they’re carrying and I don’t mean weapons, I’m referring to diseases. Now his best friend on the other hand is what he should focus on. He has the hots for him. His jaw clinched when he saw Emily’s call. Hard to compete with a girlfriend when you think your buds straight and just had a one-off unexplainable night. But is it really…….these two seemed like to be perfect for one another, with the same locked away secret. They both like the same thing, each other.