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Hello, guys!

The plan for LinieBaru is that there is going to be a grand fight in this particular arc, Subaru then wakes up in the world of Od Laguna.

Now, which direction to go?

  1. LinieBaru loses her memories.

  2. LinieBaru retains her memories but only as Subaru (pre-isekai).

  3. LinieBaru doesn’t lose her memories but her powers aren’t working.

  4. LinieBaru doesn’t lose anything.

That's the first question. The last one is where she settles for the time being.

  1. With Crusch Camp.

  2. Felt Camp.

  3. Priscilla Camp.

  4. Emilia Camp.

  5. Cult.

  6. Independent, working.

  7. Watchtower.

  8. Some other place.

Let me know what you think. Join my Discord Server for more: https://discord.gg/X7sphRUsxJ

Have a great day.

Comments

General Morgan

No opinion either way on the first part, but i think seeing LinieBaru br independent would be neat (maybe couple with the total amnesia, idk)

G

Lose nothing

Josuares

Lose nothing and independent

G

Can u have her go back and forward between worlds that would be cool

McPhoenixDavid

My plan is actually something similar... But that would be a spoiler for chapter 80... Hehe

ARMITAGE

4 and 7, wing it 😋

Perf

People despise amnesia arcs with a burning passion. 4 for sure.

G

Also independent

WaysidePacer

I think this could've been split into two separate vote posts where people can actually select their option. Ironically enough I'm not going to vote, but I will leave my two cents. Amnesia arcs I think need to handled carefully. They should show a different perspective or the nature of the character if they didn't remember. I think the best implementation of it was the Ocean's Dream filler Arc in One Piece. It didn't drag too long and didn't actually impact what the characters could do, it just sent their memories back to when the story started. It gave perspective on who they characters were at a base level prior to joining the crew. This is gonna be crazy for you, but I've never actually watched either show. I do have enough of an understanding reading FFN, reading fandom (breezewiki version) and clips but I never actually watched it. In spite of that I know enough of the basic points where it makes sense and I think I understand the characters. Out of the options you've given yourself or really the ways you're limiting going about this, 2 and 4 would be the more ideal. I think fully losing memories would make it where essentially you're rebuilding Subaru in this arc from the ground up as a different person. It's no longer "what Subaru would do" and what "LinieBaru" would do. That can be very interesting on it's own once Subaru gets their memories back but I'll be honest, your other fics go so OOC crackfic it hurts even me to read lol. Retaining memories only as Subaru to me sounds like basically if you put Subaru in Re:Zero from the get-go but as LinieBaru. So you lose all the character buildup and growth so far and you'll basically be relying on the setup you LinieBaru in and any supporting characters you bring like maybe Ubel for instance. If LinieBaru loses their powers then you're limiting yourself to what they can do at a base level as Linie and maybe what Subaru could do over time in Re:Zero. How you make it interesting depends on your muse but I've always hated arcs with the DePower trope. The last option would continue the plot as is but now with a detour in Re:Zero and whatever the implications are of LinieBaru. I'm thinking you always intended to eventually end up back in Re:Zero at some point, especially if you did some sort of cover to cover outline. Where they settle should be where you think LinieBaru would excel as a character and where you feel most people would like to see them be or where you feel they should be. I have a question for you as an author. What kind of outlining do you usually do when you write your stories?Are you a Pantser, Plantser or a heavy plotter?

McPhoenixDavid

That's a great comment, I love it! From what I have decided, I think most people, including you should approve it. Regarding the question, I have a fixed number of checkpoints which I create before writing a story. I never know what will happen between them, but I let the story flow in it's own way, reaching the checkpoints all by itself.

Kennith Kenif.

I do not know about the new setting so I cannot say how it would work with the setting. I would say she should keep what she has earned.

Brr

4 and 7+6 -with Shaula-

Arikuret

doesn't lose anything Watchtower

Sylphrena

I vote 4 and 6 if this has to happen. LinieBaru has suffered more than enough. Losing her powers would just be plain cruelty. As much as I want her to join a camp immediately, Emilia's in particular, I can't see her as willing to be trusting so easily. There goes LinieBaru x Übel though... -_-