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Amy circled her thumb and index finger around the wide base of Devlin’s manhood at Kimmy’s instruction. Devlin leaned back on the bed on his elbows, happy for his powerful sexuality to be the center of attention. Kimmy studied Amy and Devlin’s movements, wondering how unfamiliar they were with each other. The chance that Devlin had slept with Amy while she and Devlin were together wasn’t impossible. And while she had no reason to be jealous of Amy with Devlin, she couldn’t help it. But the jealousy stemmed from Devlin’s possible betrayal, not his infidelity. Devlin and she didn’t use condoms. The unspoken agreement being they were both exclusive—bar, of course, Josh.

Amy toyed with Devlin’s manhood familiarly, but they’d been together many times. It proved nothing. Amy lifted her grip on Devlin’s scrotum, hoisting his big testicles up, then waggling them. Amy regarded Kimmy with sly intention. “What are we going to do to him?”

“You’re both devils,” Kimmy said.

Devlin laughed, adjusting his elbows on the bed and getting more comfortable. “We’re all devils here,” he said, eyes on his impressive organ and its black leather accoutrement.

Kimmy slapped the leather belt against the inside of Devlin’s thigh.

Devlin clapped his legs together, eyes wide with fearful alarm.

Amy squawked and let go of Devlin’s scrotum, half upright on her knees. She laughed at Devlin’s plight.

Devlin wasn’t amused. “Fucking watch it.”

Kimmy said, “Pain and pleasure, Devlin. We’re all devils here, remember?”

“That fucking hurt.”

Kimmy said to Amy, “Hold his balls up again. Hold them steady for me.” To show her intention, she slapped the belt across her palm once more.

Devlin said, “I’m warning you, you better not hit me.”

“You don’t trust me?”

“Go ahead and find out what happens.”

“Are you threatening me?”

“The consequences of your actions aren’t a threat. The future is in your hands.”

Kimmy slapped the belt across her palm again. “Devlin the Philosopher.”

“That’s right,” he said, looking up at her through his lowered brows. Amy’s hand circled his scrotum again, his massive organ reclining on his muscular midsection, eager for action.

“Hold them up higher,” Kimmy told Amy.

Amy complied, the look on Amy’s face telling Kimmy that she enjoyed it, enjoyed the situation. Devlin on the defense, Devlin on his back with two women on top. Anything Kimmy did wouldn’t be Amy’s fault—Devlin couldn’t blame her.

Kimmy said, “Pain and pleasure. Amy’s into pleasure.”

“And pain,” Amy said.

“That’s right. Aren’t you a tormentor?”

“Only if it’s fun.”

Devlin said nothing, never taking his eyes off Kimmy and her vicious belt. A red, hazy welt grew redder on his muscular thigh.

“You don’t think I’ll hit them?”

“You want to,” Devlin said. “But you know what a bad idea that would be.”

Kimmy brought the belt down harder against Devlin’s thigh, striking almost the same spot. This time, Amy didn’t let go of Devlin’s scrotum. And while Devlin flinched and jumped, he didn’t complain or move away, gritting his teeth and snarling through it.

Kimmy smiled and held out the belt so the leather strap hung from her grip, dangling above Devlin’s scrotum. She danced the leather against his vulnerable testicles. “You don’t think I’d do it?”

Devlin’s expression didn’t brighten, didn’t soften with humor. “You’d do it if you could get away with it. You’d do it if you thought you could get out to the elevator before I caught you.”

She tilted up her chin. “How would you be able to run?”

Amy snickered. “How would you be able to run, Devlin?” She waggled his scrotum again.

Before he answered, Kimmy dropped the belt onto his testicles. Not hard enough to hurt, but enough to shock him. He grunted and his stomach muscles flexed, his big cock bouncing on them. He smiled at last, relief and the warm glow from his accurate prophecy of her resolve.

Kimmy said to Amy, “And now, show him some pleasure.”

Amy snickered again, lowered her mouth to her grip, then pressed her pooched lips against the plump plum of Devlin’s scrotum. She ran her tongue out and spread it over, working it around in wet circles, making Devlin’s eyes flutter.

Kimmy said, “Pain is nothing without pleasure. Wouldn’t you agree?”

“It’s a fine line,” Devlin said.

Kimmy flicked her wrist and snapped the belt, not striking Devlin, but making him jump to attention again.

Devlin said, “Your turn will come.”

“Promises, promises,” Kimmy said, then dangled the belt so the strap patted his testicles again. Still not hard enough to hurt, but enough to drive Devlin to the edge.

Kimmy laughed seeing his discomfort, and Amy laughed too.

Devlin said to Amy, “What’s so funny?”

Kimmy said, “You can dish it out, but you can’t take it.” She tossed the belt to the floor and put her hands on her hips in a pose like the one Devlin used when he felt at his most macho.

She said, “How long have you two been apart?”

Amy thumbed Devlin’s testicles, then kissed them. She said, “What do you mean?”

“Did you fuck over the summer?”

Amy looked puzzled, but she and Devlin shook their heads no.

“How long has it been?”

“A while,” they both said, out of sync.

Kimmy regarded Devlin. “Are you going to fuck her today?”

Devlin smiled, and Amy smiled too.

Kimmy said, “You planned on it, right?”

Devlin asked Amy, “What do you think?”

Amy smiled at Devlin, then said, “That’s up to Kimmy.”

Kimmy asked, “How bad do you want it, Amy?”

Amy said, “I want you in bed with us, Kimmy. That’s what I want.”

“What are you going to do to me?”

Amy said, “I want to see your body.”

Devlin said, “She’s not a kid anymore. She’s not that gawky teenager.”

“No, I’m not,” Kimmy said. “I’m nothing like I was.”

“I’ll say,” Amy said, eyes moving over Kimmy in devious admiration.

Kimmy shooed them with her hands, saying, “Get higher on the bed.”

Devlin scooted backwards on his elbows and Amy crawled on all fours until their heads were level with the pillows. Amy said, “What do you want to see us do?”

“I want to see you kiss,” Kimmy said.

“Just the two of us?”

Kimmy slipped off her jacket and tossed it on a side table. She said, “Show me how you kiss.”

Devlin and Amy regarded each other, unsure but confident, wondering how this woman whom they’d led to the bedroom for this moment had the upper hand over them—but not caring. They didn’t care because they never faced consequences. They didn’t care because everything was a game to them; their father’s business; an imaginary business you wanted to develop on your own; the sanctity of other people’s marriages. Nothing mattered to them but their id—unbound by the framework of ego and superego. Just fledglings mewling for more and more perverse pleasure, their mother’s teats removed from their suckling mouths. 

Amy and Devlin moved their faces closer, their eyes turning down, their lips parting. The sight of their soft mouths coming together and mushing together disgusted her. The sight was erotic, but sour and unsettling. Soft Amy, buxomer than Kimmy would ever be; Devlin, her summer lover, her betrayer and mutual conniver, hot and muscular, his oversized cock stiff and upright. Though there was much lubricious beauty, her stomach tightened and turned over. She’d almost trusted Devlin. Almost liked him a few times. There were even times she considered what a future with him would look like. Standing at the foot of the bed now, she’d never felt stupider. More deceived, more unseeing.

At least her eyes were open now.

While they kissed, she unbuttoned her shirt all the way and let it hang open. Amy and Devlin paused, looking into each other’s eyes. Something ignited between them. Seeing that shared connection burned in her heart, knowing she’d always just been a rube to them; a pawn, a geeky ingenue they could break. Amy had promised Devlin Kimmy as a sexual third partner, guaranteed him her bookish friend would have the tightest pussy. They planned on delighting in Devlin hurting her. 

Amy whispered, “Now what? What do you want to see next?” Devlin grinned next to her, his eyes flitting in the open section of her shirt. Amy saw it now too and reached out a hand, urging Kimmy to come closer. 

Kimmy put one knee on the bed, just behind Amy, and Amy sat up, opening Kimmy’s shirt and admiring her skin. “You’re so sexy,” she whispered.

Amy’s hands went to Kimmy’s naked waist, and her fingers traced over her ribs and down the flat of her stomach, slipping a soft crescent underneath Kimmy’s navel.

Devlin reached around Amy to touch her stomach, too. But Devlin’s hand wanted to touch her lower. Only wanted to touch under her navel, the woolen front of her pants covering over where her baby grew. His eyes showed the liquid sheen of the mesmerized.

When Amy’s hands roamed higher, surrendering her reproductive terrain to Devlin, going up to touch her breasts through her bra, Kimmy took her chin and pushed her back so they could look into each other’s eyes. “I want to watch you suck his cock.”

Amy’s eyes widened. She liked to be told what to do in the bedroom. She was sick and twisted, but she didn’t dominate in the bedroom. She submitted.

Devlin liked the request, saying nothing, retreating to lie on his back again, in an expectant pose, legs open, flexing his stomach and whatever muscles operated his shaft, making it lift up and down as much as it could with its beefy weight. Amy rolled to her other side, facing Devlin, showing Kimmy her naked back and ass. Kimmy got both knees on the mattress. 

Amy caressed the underside of Devlin’s huge shaft with her palm, up and down, then playing around the flared edges of his cock head with his fingertips. Devlin watched. They all did. All three of them in the bed and centering their attention on Devlin’s equine endowment.

Amy hefted it, and swirled her grip, squeezing out some of Devlin’s pre-come. Then she pressed her lips to the tip of his cock and spewed saliva, putting her hand over it and polishing the end of Devlin’s cock. Devlin’s head lolled back with the pleasure of Amy’s touch. Amy slow-stroked it, admiring his size in her hand, reacquainting herself with the size of her former lover. She sunk the head into her mouth and sucked and stroked, rolling her head around. Devlin groaned and his eyes went half-lidded.

Amy worked Devlin’s cock well. She sucked and stroked, bobbed her head, taking a few thick inches into her mouth before backing off—before gagging. She was careful with Devlin’s manhood. Almost reverential. She pleasured Devlin for a long while before holding his massive cock upright, her base clamped around where the leather strap wrapped around his very base. His cock extended upright from her grip like a thick fleshy tower, shining with her spit. She said, “I want to watch her take this. I want to see it go inside her.” She looked up at Devlin for approval. Amy didn’t run the show. Devlin smiled, his eyes flicking to Kimmy’s before returning to Amy.

“Kimmy doesn’t want to fuck me anymore,” he told Amy.

Amy looked confused, looking for clarification. Devlin chuckled and looked at Kimmy again. He sat up, his cock touching his sternum, Amy still gripping it. He reached over Amy to touch Kimmy’s belly again.

Amy said, “She doesn’t.”

“No,” Devlin said, smiling and looking up at Kimmy. She palmed Devlin’s stubbly cheek.

Devlin said to Amy,  “She thinks I’ll hurt our baby.”

Comments

JL23

Couple of truth bombs from Kimmy there. Maybe the biggest one for me: she admitted she did at one point ponder the idea of leaving Josh for Devlin. It doesn't stun me, but it surprises me she admitted it to herself. Interesting to see how Amy reacts to the news of the baby. As well as Kimmy to her knowing the "truth" about her being pregnant. In her mind, it's a con she's playing on both of them, but there is still the possibility that no matter how much she wants it to be, it's not a con at all. And she knows that. Maybe that's the darkest timeline of all for Kimmy. She works to ruin Amy and Devlin, plus whatever happens to her about the money she stole. And then in the end, the baby is actually Devlin's, and there really is nothing to tether Josh to her.

Andrew Mellein

There goes Devlin with his stupid comments.

Andrew Mellein

I wonder if that Devlin comment is going to kill this lively get together. Kimmy does seem miffed at both of them even though she has a jealous streak at Amy and Devlin being together. I get the sense she now views her summer affair with Devlin as one big giant mistake. That would be funny if it was Devlin's baby and she worked to ruin her kid's father in the end. (LOL!)

JL23

I don't think it is, cause I suspect Kimmy knew it was coming and actually wanted him to tell Amy. It feels like her plan to get revenge on each of them is to make them think she's with them fully, only to yank it away in the end. So, she wants Devlin to think he's the father, to be engaged and excited in it and the idea Josh will raise the baby, only to reveal in the end it was all bullshit. But, for that to work, it actually does have to be bullshit and Kimmy doesn't know that for sure yet. With Amy, it may be more complicated. I think she wants Amy to submit to her being the dominant partner in this unholy threesome, at least between the 2 of them. And then probably the revenge would be in her walking away I guess. Devlin's comment gives Kimmy the out not to actually have sex with him here, but I'm guessing Amy's going to push her into it, either through jealousy or lust, and that will be a real test for the "new" Kimmy who seems more disgusted than turned on by all this. Problem is, she's still turned on by this, so I'm less sure she'll be able to say no.

Bill F Protagoras

Things show signs of working well with a more revelatory Kimmy, but this only enables you to skilfully show us how much language can thwart understanding as well as facilitating communication. Already Kimmy is revealing juicy but offensive details about her feelings past and present... also I'm ready to turn the page when you are. As ever the problem is your dark excellence as an author means the welcome satisfaction you provide makes me only hunger for more. And once more you have offered us a large appetizing helping! Devlin is such a vain and spiteful bitch! Even, or especially, when orbiting his own bullying pizzle! Modern tech is such a cornucopia of helpful and treacherous devices!

JL23

You could well be right in that interpretation L_S87. By "future" with Devlin she could just mean one where they followed his vision of working together to dominate over Josh. I guess I just read into her leaving that revelation to the very end, after admitting to herself she started to like Devlin, as something more. Even if it was only a fleeting thought, and not something she seriously considered, I do feel she's saying there were moments where she pondered the idea of being with Devlin, building their business, and leaving Josh behind. Which is probably the darkest revelation she could make to herself.

Bill F Protagoras

"Devlin, her summer lover, her betrayer and mutual conniver, hot and muscular, his oversized cock stiff and upright. Though there was much lubricious beauty, her stomach tightened and turned over. She’d almost trusted Devlin. Almost liked him a few times. There were even times she considered what a future with him would look like. Standing at the foot of the bed now, she’d never felt stupider. More deceived, more unseeing."

Andrew Mellein

Yeah, I never for second thought she would consider leaving Josh for Devlin. And these last couple of chapters more than any other. Have highlighted for me how much Kimmy realizes it was a mistake to begin her affair with Devlin. Maybe it was Josh's walk off the pier or Karina's conversation. But also Devlin with Amy it all boiled into Kimmy. Problem is I think it's too late for her marriage. Also cant wait to hear back from Josh he has been absent for a couple of chapters. I wonder if he is still obsessing over Kimmy or at a point where he doesn't even care.

Bill F Protagoras

I'm disappointed to see Kimmy believes all that id, ego, superego fiddle faddle! Next she'll be talking about the lizard brain! No wonder she's so fucked up! PS It was an excellent clever extended metaphor nonetheless! The id itself tickles my fancy!

Bill F Protagoras

Eureka! L_S I was actually just imagining Kimmy and Devlin tearing Josh in two rather than the baby, as Solomon incited the mothers to do. Of course, this would result from their savage lust for the little chap!

Andrew Mellein

Her mother and baby dying did a number on her.

Bill F Protagoras

I know, Andrew, I was being facetious! I only hope for Kimmy's sake that Josh is more constant in his affections than she was.

Kat

I don’t get why Kimmy is getting undressed in front of them, and climbing on the bed. Isn’t she still taping this for Josh? In her internal monologue, she seems way more disgusted with them than turned on. Of course, Devlin turns her on, but she seems to have no interest in doing anything with Amy. Up until this point, it seemed like Kimmy was in control and working towards something vengeful. Now with the unbuttoning of her shirt, letting them feel her up, and Devlin sharing the news of her pregnancy I don’t see where this is going. On a separate note, lately every time a new chapter drops, I’m close to needing a drink to get through it. Lol

Bill F Protagoras

"The unspoken agreement being they were both exclusive—bar, of course, Josh." They were both allowed to fuck him! Unspoken to spare Devlin's suppressed feelings, and Kimmy's high dudgeon!

Bill F Protagoras

That is exactly the thought I had...' she hasn't had her eye on the ball as far as Josh is concerned'!

Andrew Mellein

L_S87 Yes! Was that where Kimmy and Devlin plotted to go alone together on some work vacation to get Josh out of the way. Basically Devlin wanted her all night and not just a quickie. But yeah I think Cayman changed those plans. So there was total intimacy involved. I have to always bring up the Josh eating Devlin's creampie out of Kimmy. I hope KT addresses that in the future. To me this was Kimmy at her most low besides Cayman. But I remember the intimacy in their conversations and how they laughed at Josh behind his back.

Andrew Mellein

How is she going to get out of there without having sex with Devlin? She put herself in a pickle. Her mind is so scatterbrained who knows what she wants at this point?

JL23

The “baby” stuff in the apartment with the realtor maybe watching (another unanswered question - a minor one, but I wonder if Betsy actually was watching) was more Kimmy playing things up, and also I think trying to exert control over Devlin. The Cayman trip was definitely the point where Kimmy was most under Devlin’s spell than at any other point. They definitely were a team then, and they did ponder the idea of going away together and tricking Josh about it being a work trip.

Andrew Mellein

I wonder if Devlin was banging other women when his affair with Kimmy was going full steam. I can see him doing it. Might be a good idea for Kimmy besides taking a paternity test and to take an std test as well!

Kat

Andrew, I wrote a long reply to you a little while ago, but somehow it disappeared. 😵‍💫

Kat

Yeah, this scene is causing me mega anxiety. 😬

Steve McCarty

Kimmy, what the hell? You are wasting precious time exacting middling revenge against these awful, soulless sexual ghouls. Remember the reason you 'had' to work on this Monday was to manage/mitigate your fraud/theft that you could have fessed up to with Josh but did not. I count three as the optimistic number in your corner; Josh may be packing up his belongings while you are indulging yourself, Hyun is most likely sobbing into a pillow somewhere because of your callous 'ghosting' while she had to share a car with her ex, in an uncomfortable at best, return trip from the boondocks where your 'soon to be ex' walked off a pier and nearly froze to death, this leaves your father, for now.

Kat

I agree with all of this. Out of every nasty, deceitful thing Kimmy has done in this story, this one has me the most disappointed in her.

Bill F Protagoras

Well put, Steve! I thought of her dad too... The man whose symbolic beneficent gift unknowingly graced her new office in order to counteract what has become an ill omened career (calculated by her damnable boss to be the ruination of her marriage), and the most excruciating of tortures for his son-in-law Josh! As L_S also pointed out, Kimmy took her eye off the ball with Josh... for what we might class as bloody shenanigans with a pair of gobbies!

Bill F Protagoras

For me, Kat, it is only the latest disappointment... but I still fear that the reviving flame of hope that remains hidden in Kimmy's lugubrious depths will be brutally snuffed out if Josh, as she puts it, turns his back on her... a final time! Won't the punishment far exceed the crime? For both of them. And an innocent. Still... “The best laid schemes o' mice an' men / Gang aft a-gley...” and what we have been witnessing could be more appositely described as the worst kind of cock-up! Yeah... my sense of humour is that dark!

Bill F Protagoras

I know how it feels Kat, it's happened to me more than a few times. Now as a given post grows longer I SAVE, then press EDIT to resume... Usually works... in part at least.

Bill F Protagoras

PS an unspoken agreement is none at all... unless it's in writing... as far as I'm concerned. But I am not a lawyer.

Kat

Thanks Bill! I usually do write somewhere else and then cut and paste it here. It was weird, because I saw it here, and then when I came back later on it was gone. It kept reposting two or three times. I deleted the duplicates, but I guess this one disappeared, too. I’m going to try and rewrite it later.

Bill F Protagoras

Yeah, I do that too when I expect to write a lot. But when I'm under the influence of a recent KT download I may start with a simple thought and then ideas start pouring into my head. As there's around a six hour time difference... it's usually early hours in the morning after a long day for me so I often think it's my fault! And I feel gutted if I lose something I worked hard to express how I wanted. Sometimes I used to just say fuck it... and try to forget it! Not a solution... as I'm sure you know... I have certainly experienced what you describe!

Bill F Protagoras

What a fine example of manliness Devlin shows when he repeatedly unequivocally threatens a pregnant woman who has previously suffered a miscarriage with physical violence. Though fair 'do's half of the chromosomes are HIS!

Andrew Mellein

Yes. The I am going to punish you bit. Seemed pretty rapey. I bet KImmy wishes Josh was there to throw another chair at him.

Bill F Protagoras

I wonder how Kimmy will eventually contemplate all those ecstatic belly filling loin quivering mind frizzling soul transmuting cataclysmic orgasms when she looks into the pitiless hollow skull fucked sockets of the many flavours of love that she deserted for a temporary, fleeting respite from grief. Why why would I commit such repulsive unreflecting unforgivable mistakes! How can I look the people who have trusted me in the eye again... This was maybe why she plunged into lust and humiliation again and again to drown her conscience in obsession and suffocate the feeling of loss every single misstep she took only intensified. Sins of the past laid to rest in the vainglorious ornate mausoleum of the present! The atrocities thought, and foolishly enacted... carved in stone... In memoriam!

Bill F Protagoras

"No thing beside remains. Round the decay Of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare The lone and level sands stretch far away." 11 January 1818 under the pen name "Glirastes." 'Lover of dormice'... the 'mouse' he loved created an un-named monster.

Bill F Protagoras

"The grave’s a fine and private place, But none, I think, do there embrace." Which is why I am of Kimmy's part, despite being critical of her choices. Love is blind! “For loue is blynd alday and may nat see.” Chaucer... though Shakeshaft sprinkled the idea on a few plays. On another note, it seems unfair of me to have played my pipe to Kimmy's bewitching tune so often, and then to play the puritan and condemn her for it!

Bill F Protagoras

Actually, despite the vagaries of Kimmy's self serving claims to be the embodiment of strength, I do think she has the much more valuable 'true grit' acquired through suffering, but so has Josh... and I think they can both attest it is no panacea! I only hope it will see her through the hard times.

Bill F Protagoras

Devlin might not be able to break Kimmy, but Josh might without meaning to...

Kat

I liked how you said, “under the influence of a recent KT download.” I am the same way. Lol The other day, I was in my car waiting at a traffic light when the notification dinged re: a KT update. I had appointments, and was carting my son around to meet friends downtown. As you said, the ideas were pouring in my head, and after I dropped my son off, I tried to type them out fast in the parking lot within the Patreon app, and that was my first mistake. Lol. I have ADD, so sometimes if I don’t get my thoughts out right then I forget them. 🤪

Kat

Okay, let’s try this again. On Friday I posted a lot of thoughts about this chapter, but my post disappeared. Andrew had said he didn’t know how Kimmy was going to get out of the room without sleeping with Devlin. While I don’t see Kimmy as being attracted to Amy (quite the opposite, she seems disgusted by her), she is still wildly attracted to Devlin’s body. As much as she says she hates him, she doesn’t hate everything about him. Up until this chapter I was really liking Kimmy’s control and resolve. Her internal monologue was definitely disgust for both Amy and Devlin. I was hoping Kimmy was going to do something humiliating to them, and then leave with her evidence. She could blackmail them, etc., but it would be her choice, her control. I thought that seeing Josh near death two days earlier actually meant something to her. And yes, it did. This isn’t the same Kimmy from Book 5 to 9, but why is she unbuttoning her shirt and letting them feel her up? Why is she still recording this? Does she really think showing Josh a tape of her instructing naked Amy to suck naked Devlin’s dick, while she sits on the bed and watches (with her shirt all the way unbuttoned) is going to endear herself to her husband? What’s going to happen now that Devlin’s spilled the beans about Kimmy’s pregnancy? Are they all going to have a good laugh mocking Josh? Is that going to be captured on Kimmy’s phone, too? Someone mentioned about a paternity test, and maybe Kimmy has already had one done and knows Josh is the father. That might work for me as to why she’s there and doing all this stuff instead of being at home, and trying to save her marriage. But, if she really knows Josh is the father, she should be running home with the proof in her hands begging him for another chance, not fucking things up, yet again, with these old high school assholes. Who the hell cares what happened 10 years ago?! If Kimmy is as great as she says she is in her monologues, she should turn around and leave, and never look back. She should be worried about the stolen money, not showing off for Amy’s benefit. Out of all the selfish, cruel things Kimmy has done in this book, this one has me the most disappointed in her, because she knows what’s right and what’s wrong. She knows she shouldn’t be there, but she can’t leave. She’s still hoping to gaslight Josh into doing things her way. It’s not going to help her if she ends up in prison, and her baby is sent to foster care. Go home Kimmy! Run!

Andrew Mellein

Yes Kat! I am still shocked Kimmy is still working at Devlin's firm especially after everything that has happened. Who cares about the stolen money and her cockamamie revenge plan. Kimmy should have been trying to repair her marriage after the hotel incident. Shows Josh where her true priorities lie. I would love if she came back from this encounter with Devlin and Amy and caught Josh in bed with another woman. It would serve her right. If this marriage somehow survives. I think Josh is entitled to an unlimited amount of hall passes!

Kat

If Josh dates/sleeps with someone else it will send Kimmy running to Hyun. I’m tired of the Hyun/Kimmy thing. Kimmy’s going to wreck Hyun’s life, too.

Bill F Protagoras

Yes, Kat, most of what has been recorded seems more damning for Kimmy than placatory for some future perversely gullible, doomed to be a 'loser,' fantasy Josh. I find it puzzling... certainly seems as though she's lost the plot... or she thinks she still has cards to play. Or perhaps what she thought early on in the instalment was a dark epiphany! "Standing at the foot of the bed now, she’d never felt stupider. More deceived, more unseeing." So much for the great pretender?

Kat

Yes, exactly. Kimmy seems to have lost the plot in this scene. Why is she there unbuttoning her blouse, on a video she’s making for Josh?

Steve McCarty

Thank you Kat for taking the time to repost this. "old high school assholes" is exactly who they are. Glenn reminds me of Cole, a 'one eye on the mirror' smug prick who thinks every hot girl will eventually succumb to his incandescent charm. I loathe Cole and think that at some point he could end up cheating with Maggie's mom.

Donkatsu

Steve, he already rogered Carol during the courtship (or at least some perverts can so infer), that's why Martin sent him to the Dubai office, without Maggie or the child -; Kat, great post. Kimmy has lost the plot, still does not understand how much trouble she is in either personally or legally.

Kat

Omg, I loathe Cole. He’s such a douchebag. There’s no substance there. I hope if there’s ever an epilogue in the final Keely book, it shows Max and Keely happily married with kids, and Maggie alone because Cole is off cheating.

Andrew Mellein

Yes, I loathe Cole but also Maggie. Truth be told I have never cared for the Maggie and Keely series. I always felt Max should have stood up for himself more. I never bought the threesome sexual relationship of Maggie, Cole, and Max. If I was Max I would have told Cole to butt the fuck out of my relationship. Max needed to be more like Josh. Also I like Separate Schools which deals with College better.

Kat

The Maggie series was so hard to read. I had to stop at times and take a break. I also dislike Maggie. I think she’s the worst, even worse than Kimmy. I loved it when Keely told her off, and told her she was “scraping him off your shoe.” Maggie and Cole are both very unlikeable characters. I enjoyed the Keely stories because they gave us a different side of Max, seeing him being treated with love and care. It also showed that he had a real personality and was a great guy, He just needed the right woman to bring it out of him. IMO, Maggie and Cole come off as self entitled and phoney. Yeah, I also don’t get how the threesome thing worked for so long. They wanted to get rid of him for a while, but yet Maggie continued to string him along, wearing his ring on a chain around her neck. I don’t understand how in the end, Max let Cole sleep with Keely again. I get his kink, but doing it with that guy. Why? It can’t be because he trusts him. How could you ever trust a jerk like Cole after everything that happened? Kimmy, on the other hand, cheated with her husband’s tormentor. Yes, very bad, but she never loved Devlin, and never intended on leaving Josh for him. She has regretted her actions, too, While it hurt and destroyed Josh, Devlin was never someone Josh trusted or confided in. Josh also has a lot more backbone than Max did. He stood up to Devlin, throwing a chair and injuring him. Max seemed to develop a little more backbone as he matured into a man. Maggie seemed to have no regrets for what she did to Max. She strung him along, and did so using his best friend under the guise of experimenting, The experimenting stopped sometime after the weekend at her parents’ house, and the threesome in the music room. IMO, after that it was all cheating.

Tracey52

We need to let the scene play out. Kt has never disappointed me.

Bill F Protagoras

Or me. So Kimmy was bad... I'm in no position to cast the first or indeed any other stone. Kimmy done wrong... but what good would be served by punishing her more than she already is herself? Even dipping her hand in the Stone till is a trifle much less blameworthy than what they and their ilk do on a daily basis... Fuck them! The most that it hurts is their overweening, totally unwarranted, pride! I hope the dad and his legal lackey made a slip investigating Kimmy and as a result the IRS reams them out! Fucking brokers! Then they too will always be able to look back on the Caymans...

Bill F Protagoras

I agree with a lot of what you say Kat, but will only point out two things that immediately sprang to my mind... Maggie did Max a favour when she deserted him for Cole... He was in many important ways much better than either of them. And Max didn't stop Keely from sleeping with Cole, or anyone else because he loved her and trusted HER enough not to fall into the mistake of acting out like a jealous wanker! For some reason women, and even men, don't like being considered little more than chattel! I just realized in some ways I look back on Max being the most pivotal character of that series! At the least, on a par with Josh or Geoff!

Andrew Mellein

Kat have you read Separate Schools by KT? Taylor is a total Maggie type. But her boyfriend Harrison is no Max and he actually hooks up with some other girl and Maggie gets extremely jealous. Granted this is after she cheated on Harrison and is hooked up with some other guy. I love it more than the Maggie series and Keely series!

John

Noticing the comparison to other KT series, surprised Charlie, Johnny, and Reza weren’t mentioned… Admittedly apples to oranges in that any of Charlie’s transgressions are far more excusable than Kimmy and Maggie. For those who have growing distaste for the latter, I’d thought Charlie would get mentioned for remaining tantalizingly innocent and naughty… I for one am struggling to be patient for the final Landlord book. Lack of mention here has me worried that my interest in that series isn’t widely shared.

Andrew Mellein

Nope I love that series and want KT to hurry up and close out this series and then get back to it. I love Charlie and even though she does alot of naughty things (due to her husband's stupidity). I dont for a second think she would ever leave Johnny for Reza and Tate. Hopefully Johnny gets that cock cage off and performs admirably for his wife because she was taken for a ride by both Reza and Tate (LOL!) But I noticed usually in KT book or series their is a scene of cheating on a spouse or loved one. But in Landlord I don't recall Charlie ever knowingly cheating on Johnny behind his back. It's always with Johnny present or with Charlie telling him what happened. Interesting.

Bill F Protagoras

John, I have every hope KT will turn her eagle eye to Charlie who is most certainly my darling amongst KT Morrison's regiment of monstrously attractive women. With KT we are spoiled for choice as Andrew doesn't hesitate to point out. I am only grateful that she is displaying her far from inconsiderable talents with such devastating effect and originality right now with characters as magnificent and complex as the Waters. Especially in so far as how much they have both been maligned and maltreated. Kimmy is the bravest and most embattled of the author's outstanding misjudged creations for now. Josh is the most grossly underestimated... Charlie, the justified fiery maned dark horse... As for the many others... weave a circle round me thrice, and close your eyes with holy dread, for I for one on honey- dew have fed and supped the milk of Paradise... not to mention being kept awake in a savage place as holy and enchanted as ever beneath a waning moon was haunted by woman wailing for her demon-lover! Though the big A does deliver! Kimmy's voice sure does carry too!

Bill F Protagoras

Yet, Andrew, she still hasn't let Jonny in on the significance of the asterisk tattooed on her arse! Or me!

Bill F Protagoras

Definitely agree with you on Cole's lack of substance, Kat! I know the USA loves to deny its greatest failings, but Maggie choosing Cole over Max, though masked by all the fear and drama, was because of class! Which made it so ironic that Maggie luxuriated in the affection of her ex's family! I probably don't dislike Maggie as much as you do, but it has always irked me how precious she is! I also agree that the saga has been in abeyance until 'Keely' puts the rigmarole to bed, tucks it in, and hopes the bed bugs don't bite! I love it... but like a guilty pleasure! I was glad to to see Keely revealed as a Carnaval Oueen rather than a consolation prize conceded by Max's self-satisfied, well-off 'pals' with their own what strikes me as a diplomatic marriage. PS I don't think you live in the US... but like Mexico so far from God but so close to the United States! A sentiment attributed to Porfirio Díaz.

Andrew Mellein

Didn't Maggie cheat on Cole and have a threesome with Keely and Max in one of the Keely books? I wonder if that is the reason we see Keely getting boned by Cole at the end of Maggie? Also because Max likes to watch.

John

Andrew - it’s been a while and I may be mixing in my own preferences over KT’s actual wording…but I recall Charlie accompanying Reza on a business trip during much which he was dismissive towards her. And Charlie was hungry of which Reza made certain Johnny was aware. While the extenuating circumstances merit giving her a pass, it remains gutting and it’s precisely that angst I find titillating. A woman giving into her lusts while retaining her innocence.

John

Bill, Xanadu - Wordsworth or Coleridge? I think I’ve got that wrong.

Bill F Protagoras

Sorry, John, noticed your question just now... Coleridge reworded to make sense in a personal context and to give Kimmy the role of the keening sex crazed wife who deserted the house carpenter for a demon lover thereby losing her child(ren) and gaining a home in the hills of hell... I changed the order of Coleridge's ending for my own grubby purposes... 'Kubla Khan' a drug induced masterpiece (or mastered pieces)... "A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e’er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! 'And from this chasm, with ceaseless turmoil seething, As if this earth in fast thick pants were breathing, A mighty fountain momently was forced: Amid whose swift half-intermitted burst Huge fragments vaulted like rebounding hail' " (this last bit reminds me of Devlin's resentful clownish spoiled ejaculation!) Then near the envoi of the poem... "Could I revive within me Her symphony and song, To such a deep delight ’twould win me, That with music loud and long, I would build that dome in air, That sunny dome! those caves of ice! And all who heard should see them there, And all should cry, Beware! Beware! His flashing eyes, his floating hair! Weave a circle round him thrice, And close your eyes with holy dread For he on honey-dew hath fed, And drunk the milk of Paradise." Thank goodness 'a person on business from Porlock' interrupted the inspiration of Sam's opiate induced trip to Xanadu... so instead of some longer discursive tale we got a multifaceted gem that evokes the complexity of Romanticism during its birth pangs. Although Rime of the Ancient Mariner was pretty discursive but still fucking brilliant! Coleridge and Wordsworth were fast friends... and I was trying unsuccessfully to remember some lines from Wordsworth's Prelude when I was arsing around with Coleridge's muse. Uncanny, ey!

Bill F Protagoras

As for Josh... who needs to be a man when he's a mensch.! Or Hyun is going to put Kimmy straight (sorry for the confusing idiom) if she catches even the shortest glimpse of the video. In terms of strength of character Hyun seems the polar opposite of Kimmy to me. She would temper her own passions for what she sees as right. Perhaps I'm tempting fate, or rather KT... Hyun is straight without being straight-laced... She's a better crowd for Kimmy to be mixing with than the pre-post adolescents of Nevereverland. Though Devlin could never ever attain lift off for all that shade he casts. Nevermind the bollox! Or his weighty intellect! Also every time Devlin makes a wish an Amy dies a little death!

Bill F Protagoras

I too remember it, John, and if I remember aright it was difficult to tell who she was spiting most with her lust for strange cock, the direct cause of her annoyance Reza, or careless Jonny who was the reason Charlie's body was being used for barter in the first place! She was manifesting her grievances!

John

Ah - I was almost on track then, was thinking Xanadu was the poem’s name, but Kubla Khan was what I was thinking of. Couldn’t recall which one wrote it.

Bill F Protagoras

An easy mistake to make, after all it begins "In Xanadu..." and is more about the place than the man. I usually have to compose myself and think about the title. My key memory is the end of the poem, and then the unspecified woman wailing for her demon-lover.