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splash page art (Patreon)

Published:
2024-04-19 16:52:57
Edited:
2024-04-19 16:54:05
Imported:
2026-06

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So I figured the team's fight with Karth would make for a good splash page. Here's the 1st draft sketch. I was like, 'damn! 99% there already!Thoughts?

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Clifton Thrasher

Looks great, I thought boomer was still kinda egg shaped with magnetic arms?

Ghost4576

Damn, looks great

Hayden Leech

Homeboy needs a the symbol of Gna’Kis glowing on his forehead.

Hayden Leech

I especially like boomer. The other cover makes him look a little funky.

Macronomicon

you think he just looks bad in print as an ovoid? The possibility has occured to me.

Kurt A

Pregnant heather-body in the background acting as a cheerleader?

Hayden Leech

Not sure! I like this one a lot more. I think the humanoid arms/fingers adds something. I’ve definitely anthropomorphized boomer so maybe the humanoid shape just resonates. Not sure!

Sanairb

Wow, that's a great picture. Karth needs a red bionic eye though.

Kiew

Amazing

Fervent Fiend

Looks great! But Nat looks a little too child-like. I know she’s small, but is she “you’re on a list” small?

Owen Kaz

Could you perhaps alter where Karth's arm meets the bionic/robot arm? That little gap between it and his arm just looks off. Especially with a trolls regeneration. It looks like he has an amputated stump rather than an integrated arm. Other than that, it looks pretty damn good to me. Although I will agree with that other commenter to a degree, Nat seems to reach up to Perry's waist right now height wise. Everything else is fine, she just needs to be a bit taller. Currently my brain puts her as a halfling Artificer when looking at this.

H

Isn’t Karth supposed to have a visible demonic glyph on his forehead?

Ronin

I really, really dig that Karth's head is vaugely Baboonish instead of the stereotypical Orcish face and head. Feels both menacing and unique.

ForverSOlo

Don't worry too much about it. A lot of web novels are know to have a character that is in all respects a child except in age and I think you've done a good job of making Nat feel like a person with small person problems lol.