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***Chemestro***

“You wanted to see me?” Chemestro asked.

“Take a seat,” Solaris said, motioning to the seat across from his desk. Chemestro gave an inward shrug and sat across from the ruler of Franklin City.

“I’ve been waiting for the right time to do this. Every six or eight years, after High tide, I like to do some…clean up. Cut out certain cancerous growths that might’ve destabilized the city if excised during High Tide.”

Chemestro’s heart shot into his throat. He could only assume Solaris was talking about him. He was too close to the super to dodge or deflect. Solaris could literally move at the speed of light.

Is he gonna kill me?

“Kid, you’ve got what it takes to be an Anchor.”

Chemestro’s brows climbed.

“You see, I’ve seen a lot of supers go mad and lose touch with reality, seems to come with the territory. My greatest fear is that one day the same thing will happen to me, and I’ll wipe Franklin city out like a child’s sandcastle.

“To prevent that, I like to keep a handful of supers on hand who have a shot at killing me.”

Solaris’s gaze bored into Chemestro’s eyes.

“You might be one of them.”

“I thought the Anchors were supposed to replace you if you died.”

“Well, yeah, but an Anchor is pretty much the only way I could die,” Solaris shrugged. “I haven’t aged in sixty years. I’m a hundred and six years old. I’ve been torn in half, decapitated, eaten, banished to hell – not the Christian hell, but close – adventured across magical lands, cursed, flung into space…you name it.”

Solaris’s gaze lost focus as he seemingly got lost in his memories. A moment later the super shook it off.

“I got off topic, this is about Post-Tide cleanup. You’re gunning for Anchor, and you’re so veryclose to achieving it, but there’s one little problem.”

“Tell me what it is, and I’ll deal with it,” Chemestro said. He was getting one step closer to achieving Father’s primary mission.

“As long as Neuron is alive, I can’t give you that kind of political power.” Solaris said, leaning back in his chair.

“Excuse me?” Chemestro asked.

“You heard me. Neuron has a stable of young, powerful supers, about your age, that he has groomed from birth to obey him without question, making him one of the more influential Thinkers in the city…”

“But those young, powerful supers don’t actively contribute anything to the defense of the city, simply remaining in cloistered training, desperately competing with each other in order to win favor with Father.”

Chemestro’s eye twitched.

“I think to myself, yes, Neuron has his fingers in a lot of pies, but his businesses are mostly corrupt drains on the city designed to line his pockets.”

“If the brain were to kick the bucket, there would be a flood of new blood on the streets, along with a substantial correction in corruption-based loss of wealth.”

“Now it might take a couple years to sort out the good ones from the bad ones, but I’m confident we could handle Neuron’s children and stabilize the city before the next High Tide.”

“Long story short: It wasn’t previously the case, but your value in my eyes has surpassed that of your father. If you wish to be in line to run this city, Neuron must be gone and his children allied behind you as a powerful political force.”

“Are you asking me to kill my Father?” Chemestro said, a strange emotion welling up inside him. He clamped down on it. He could talk to Lu’ann about it later.

“You don’t have to kill him, no.” Solaris said before pausing. “But you do have my permission.”

***Paradox***

“The favor is, and I quote: You must invite a woman of red hair and one of black to a grand ball you will host for the local manitians of note, for which occasion you will have studied the history and etiquette so as not to embarrass me, lest I consider the favor unfulfilled.”

“All one sentence?” Natalie asked.

“One sentence, one favor, I think was the idea.” Perry said with a shrug. “So, umm…you guys wanna go to a magical royal ball with a bunch of fantasy creatures?”

Nat’s eyes sparkled, her expression lighting up.

“Of c-“

“Hold on,” Heather said, slapping a hand over Nat’s mouth. “This nerd’s required to bring a redhead and a black-haired girl. If he doesn’t, he’s technically failed, and his gramma gets another favor. We have leverage.”

“Not thatmuch leverage,” Perry said. “There are other girls with the right hair color.”

“Oh yeah, ones you wanna take to a ball?” Heather asked.

Perry rolled his eyes.

“What are your demands?”

“I want a Mox-feather dress.” Heather said immediately. “Obviously I can’t wear a t-shirt and leggings.”

Perry still had the supplies, and it was a good request. Gramma’s expectation to ‘not embarrass her’ basically translated to ‘blow everyone else out of the water.’

“That’s a good idea, actually” Perry said, already mentally drawing up plans. “Text me a pic of the dress you’d like, and I’ll make it.” Perry glanced over at Natalie. “You too, Nat.”

“R-really?” She asked.

“Do you have a dress?” Perry asked.

Nat opened her mouth and closed it.

“No…”

“Alright, Nat, what are your demands?” Perry said, glancing at Natalie.

“Hey, why does she get a dress and a demand!?” Heather asked.

“Because you wasted yours on something you were probably gonna get anyway,” Perry said, leaning down as Nat motioned him closer.

“I’d um, I’d like a spirit smithing forge.” She whispered into his ear, her breath tickling his hair.

Perry’s eyebrows rose. If he retained all the skills and memories Gerome had implanted in him, it stood to reason that Nat did too. The only problem was that spirit smithing forges were more than a little difficult to source, hence why Nat hadn’t done any since then.

She pulled back, tapping her fingers together nervously. “Is that okay?”

“Sure, I can make that happen.” Perry said.

“Make what happen?” Heather asked.

Perry grinned and gave her a wink. “It’s a secret.”

“Oh, you suck,” Heather said, barely keeping the smile from blooming on her face. “I’m taking Nat shopping for dresses. You’ve both got terrible fashion sense.”

“Guilty as charged,” Perry said, raising his hands.

Perry had been thinking about wearing one of those T-shirts with a tuxedo pattern printed on the front.

Obviously he shouldn’t do that, but man…it was tempting.

Maybe a T-shirt that says ‘Big Balls’ with the AC~DC logo on the back?

…Nah.

Nat and Heather wandered off to the nearby sofa and began scrolling through their phones, showing each other dresses.

Perry glanced down at his hand.

He couldn’t resist.

Light.

3/5

Above his hand, a pale orb of pure light manifested.

In Perry’s soul, he’d implanted two filters abutting Abun’Zaul. Each filter only allowed pure Essence to flow through it.

Each filter had each been impregnated with a starter essence: Moonlight and Lunar Lotus.

Abun’Zaul, by its very nature, sought to spread into every nook and cranny it could, pushing against the filter and mimicking the essence it found there. Eventually, raw essence of the flavor Perry needed began slowly seeping through the filters, pushed through by Abun’zaul’s insistent pressure.

Abun’zaul would push the starter essence through the filter, then the essence it had created to copy the starter essence would lose connection because of the narrow filter cutting any kind of control.

Abun’zaul would come into contact with this essence it had lost contact with, recognize it as ‘foreign’, then try to mimic it and push through the filter. Ad nauseum.

It was a bit like priming a well, except whatever you primed the well with would be what came out.

Connecting the two filters together was the infrastructure to combine the two essences and control them at will. Perry could modulate the brightness and control where the light went, but couldn’t change the color.

With the way his spell system was currently designed, Perry would have to undergo a surgery for every new spell he wanted to acquire, and the spells did not share slots.

There was no such thing as universal essence, so every individual kind of essence he wanted to use would require both a filter inserted in his soul, and an example of the essence to prompt Abun’zaul’s spirit to begin copying it.

It was possiblethat he could make an extra-large filter connected to a storage tank that would go to many different spells. Vivant Root was a very common ingredient that would benefit from centralization.

But that was a problem for the future.

Perry was chomping at the bit to get his next spell installed, but he’d already decided during a moment of rationality that he would wait at least a month before doing any further soul surgery.

He needed to know:

1: Can Abun’Zaul corrode/wear away the Spell Frame in his soul? Ditto for The System. If so, it was back to the drawing board.

2: Will the soul surgery have any lasting effects? If so, what kind?

3: How much recovery time is needed between surgeries?

Perry already felt a lot better than he did the night before, but his Stability urged him to take it slow and steady.

Stability was rarely wrong.

Ding!

Ding!

A text from Heather followed shortly by one from Nat caught his attention.

He opened up the texts and studied the dresses. Natalie’s was a bit more attention-grabbing than he’d have given her credit for, but that was probably Heather’s influence.

“Alright, I can copy these. So I take it you both are going, then?”

“Yes, it sounds amazing!” Nat said.

“Sure.” Heather said.

“Good!” Perry reached under one of his workbenches and retrieved the abridged book of manitian royal etiquette. It weighed about twenty pounds.

The tome hit the surface of the table with a satisfying thud, and Perry placed his fingertips on top of the leather cover.

“This is the abridged book of manitian royal etiquette. Since you are representing me, you’ll be joining me in studying it…exhaustively.”

Heather turned and ran for the exit, but she was too slow.

“LCC Lockdown.”

The doors of Perry’s lair shut in front of her, casuing Heather to come to a screeching halt before she pancaked on the heavy doors.

“Damn,” Heather muttered, slinking back towards them.

“I thought you were a straight-A student.” Perry said innocently.

“Doesn’t mean I like boring shit,” Heather muttered.

“It sounds really interesting to me!” Natalie said “It’s like a puzzle, every rule lets you guess about some facet of the history of another planet! How is that not cool?” She said, struggling to lift the book and open it up.

“Like this!” she pointed to a random line in the book. “You shalt not take Bregthor beast to a formal dinner.”

“One went mad when it saw a familiar person with an unfamiliar hairstyle and tried to tear off their face. Needless to say they were no longer allowed in the queen’s presence.” Perry said.

“That’s pretty metal.” Heather said, nodding. “Why’s it in English?”

“It’s not, it’s just enchanted so anyone can read it.” Perry reached up to the back of the cover and slightly drew out one of the enchanted pins in the spine.

“Whoah,” Natalie breathed as the text squiggled like it was alive before reforming in Manitian. Perry pushed the pin back in and it was English again.

“It’s also worth more than my lair, so don’t set your drink on it.”

“Come on, I’ll sit on your lap and read it to you,” Nat said, dragging a reluctant Heather back to the couch.

Perry half-listened while Nat read the preamble and began listing things not to do, the majority of which were intended for non-human company such as how to wear your gills.

Perry felt like it was safe to half-listen until the actual chapter on royal conduct.

In the meantime…Perry flipped up his phone and snagged the two pictures off his text messages and put them on his computer.

He looked up the style of dresses and a pattern for how to sew them.

Looks pretty easy.

Making fancy dresses wasn’t rocket science, and Perry already had that down.

Just making a beautiful dress seemed…a little lackluster. Below the level of Paradox. Below grandma’s level, for that matter.

Not to mention, there was definitely going to be some kind of battle at the ball.

That was just how life worked in Franklin City.

“Can I add sleeves to Natalie’s dress?” Perry asked.

“Sure, I guess.” Nat said, glancing up from her reading.

Alright, so I want to include Paradox’s Fabulous Earth Armor, obviously, but I’d like to go above and beyond on the material of the dress itself, and if I add sleeves to Natalie’s dress, I can add contracting fibers to add a couple hundred pounds to her upper body strength.

…except it wouldn’t affect her grip strength or lower body strength. Obviously I can’t make it a full suit, either. Damn.

Perry glanced over at the tank where he grew the matte-black carbon nanofibers that formed the bulk of his Mk. 4’s armor.

He glanced over at where he grew Heather’s hyperweave.

Yeah…that could work. Maybe I can make it a full suit. Just a little tweak and he could make the hyperweave transparent.

‘Nylon’ gloves and stockings attached to the dress could make the whole thing an actual suit. A super suit.

Muahahaha!

Plus Nat was very small so this prototype wouldn’t cost him that much.

Oh, I forgot, one more thing!

***Sophie***

Sophie was minding her own business, bent over the counter, leaning on her elbow and doing data entries for the motel when she sensed someone approaching behind her.

She shifted her stance in a way that she knew would make her vacuum-sealed butt look good,and added a little wiggle for good mea-

“OW!” Sophie yelped as a sharp pain bloomed on her scalp.

“Thanks for the hair, Sophie! This is for work!” Paradox said, waving three of her long blond hairs back at her as he left, not paying her a second glance.

Sophie huffed and fixed her hair back in a bun, pouting at the retreating Tinker.

I know my goal is to get the three of them together, but being completely ignored like this is damaging my confidence.

Comments

nugitoBambino

yesssss!!! i'm delighted Sophie's on the thruple train - If i'm the team with the super-match maker then I know it's gonna go great

Domy

See Mac, when we ask annoying questions, you get more writing material. 😊

Reyhulko

Poor Sophie XD

Sam

Like "How much soul could a Perry chuck if a Perry could chuck soul?"

Kabir Kumar

I'm more interested in Chemestro's story than Perry's at this point. Feels like there's much more danger, stakes and a real chance of failure. And less technobabble.

Trathnonen

Well this ought to prove interesting.

Macronomicon

Sorry about the technobabble, guess it comes with the Tinker/Wizard territory. Also I got a bunch of requests to clarify how the spell system works.

Kabir Kumar

that's not so bad, it's Perry never losing at all and mostly never feeling like he has a real risk of losing anything that's slowly making things less interesting. On the bright side, Chemestro's storyline has some real tension and his character has become really interesting! His story feels like drama-fantasy-sci-fi, with Perry's feeling more like wish fulfillment/slapstick.

Daedalus

The technobabble is one of my favorite parts, for what it's worth

nugitoBambino

technobabble's one of my fav's too. Personally I like the lower-key slice-of-life we get from Perry and co. and am satisfied having the equivalent of a more grimdark side story from Chemstro separate and not having a huge impact. Reminds me more of Superminion

Kabir Kumar

Slice of life is nice and I like that too. It's just that in most of the action scenes with Perry, there doesn't feel like there's much tension at all.

Daedalus

I think that's mostly Perry's carefree attitude seeping through the narration.

Kabir Kumar

But when was the last time any confrontation wasn't a win for Perry? If he wins every time and we know he's going to win every time, how is that fun? And it's not like Onepunch Man either, where the premise is that he's going to win the fight, but might lose socially and the protagonist fight itself is pretty quick so it doesn't drag on. Perry's confrontations feel are almost like a feeling of when is he going to win and by how much rather than if he's going to win at all.

Kabir Kumar

Not trying to rag on the story here, I do like most of it, its just that Perry and his family/friends are getting kinda boring because they never lose. Feels like there's very little consequences for them, which is making the victories boring.

Daedalus

My primary enjoyment of the story is based around how Perry solves his non-violent problems or auxiliary issues around being a superhero. He also took a loss just a couple chapters ago when Mass Driver beat him up inside his lair, and what made that fun was watching Perry enact his glorious revenge afterwards.

Thanatos

I’m the opposite, I find Chemestro insufferable and overpowered in an annoying way.

Sam

I feel the same way that others do about Chemestro, his power is basically a big 'I-win' button. There hasn't been an effective counter to it. The only thing that has kept Chemestro in check was Solaris promising to kill him if he killed Perry.

Domy

More like Perry’s soul makes magic spells by the seawall

Kabir Kumar

Chemestro has lost to Perry and in small ways to others several times now though. And it's been shown that his dad has a counter to his power as well. And that it needs to be applied well for precise things.

Macronomicon

No problem. I understand everything's not gonna land with everybody, and you definitely can't argue someone out of feeling the way they do. I'll keep the comments in mind as I go forward, though.

Dash of Salt

Just wanna throw him that I love the slice of life nature, it seems like a lot of stories start out with great slice of life and interpersonal interactions and dynamics and then lose that when the epic story line get started in earnest

Kabir Kumar

The slice of life is nice. Would be nice to see some characters having lives outside of Perry though.

Sanairb

While for me, its the different ways they grow that I love. So I don't really care if they never lose as long as it forces them to get better.

SaltyC

@nugitoBambino I miss super minion so much

c. beck harbinson

interesting thing about ceremonial event coming in military garb is often just as valid as other formal outfits which means suit of armor in a fantasy world

mhaj58

I’m telling you that if you’re going to make a ball arc, make sure that the dancing and romantics are done before someone inevitably crashes and attempts murder

David Giles

Credit to Solaris for ensuring he has a contingency plan for himself

Cyrus McEnnis

OK. A ball. That means we're likely to get mistaken identities, a betrayal, a jump to conclusions and an unexpected revelation. If a fracas does break out then it's a more of a hootenanny than a ball, from a technical perspective. Possible plotlines: - Perry is creating the clothing, and identifies as a mage. He could be co-opted for the "fairy god-mother" role for a Mantanian waif who will turn up in a power tuxedo & crush her enemies before her & listen to the lamination of their menfolk - Perry has a betrothal due to obscure Mantanian customs that he should have read about but just skimmed over. Bonus marks if it's to John >.> - Nat is too nice and causes a diplomatic incident by deferring to authority - Heather gets possessed by Anya and wrecks havoc after being dismissed as arm-candy by an arrogant young master type - Clothing by Perry becomes a thing as Mantanian society realises that Perry can Do Things™ with the mox that mortal tailors can't. Becomes part of his burgeoning business empire, and the two mutant brothers we were introduced way back when become his principle designers / tailors & take the world by storm.

Raymond Howard

i like multiple angles on this i think it would be kinda funny if a betrothal happened because Nat is too nice and ends up in some kind of duel of honor that fulfills a custom, the clothing business thing is a good angle as well and would always love to see more economical plots developed but tbh i think he has his hands quite full atm with all his other projects and budding mage powers. With all of that said I'm hoping Nat comes thru with a better solution with the soul forge to help herself and the team grow in power.

Cyrus McEnnis

Oh, and there _has_ to be a scene where Heather & Perry are fighting over who gets the first dance with Nat, & as a direct result of their squabbling some cretin who's so overbred he's gluten free gets dibs.

Macronomicon

I have never written anything that silly, and frankly think I would be terrible at the execution? Do you guys actually wanna see something like that?

Macronomicon

HAHAHAHA! I may have to use that. Perry points to a part in the ettiquette bok that vaguely implies he can wear power-armor to the ball.

LucasTheLost

I am so ashamed of you right now @Kabir Kumar! You march right to your room and think about what you've done!

Cyrus McEnnis

What I want to see is Perry taking the obligation and turning it into an opportunity. An oblitunity, if you will. So, in your shoes I'd simply work out what the desired outcomes are for the event from the main players, and workshop whether Perry helps, hinders, or subverts things. I'd also be pinning down precisely what type of ball this is - from the sounds of it, it's a debutante ball for Perry, but it could just as easily be a dance competition that Perry's walking into with 0 prep. If only he knew someone who could stand in for him if that was the case >.>

Dion Crump

Are dueling glove slaps a thing in their culture? I want Perry to have a glove robot he can use to dueling slap and surprise attack with in the middle of a duel

STORRM

its like if batman had the powers of super man

STORRM

"take the world by storm" you cant prove anything..

Raymond Howard

tbh if you decide to go with the duel route i'd believe there would be a political component to it, like his grandmother setting the duel up to gain more leverage on Perry to try and get him to sire children quicker

Macronomicon

Man if i wanted to make them sire children quicker, i would dump them on a deserted island with plenty of food but no modern entertainment. give it a couple months and somebody's gonna be preggers.

Carl Mason

Bonus points if the gate crasher is John, the Magical Biker Gang leader from the other city.

Nathan Quitugua

i had to remember who John was but hes another manitian royal who was in line for the throne if i remember correctly...and I absolutely approve of him getting caught in a betrothal to Perry. When Perry makes a point about them both being males, his grandma comes through with a spell that either a...creates a baby from thier essence that she takes and decides to raise for the first 5 years or b. gender swapping shenanigans

Nathan Quitugua

I fully expect there to be a display of magic powers in which case, Perry's new tricks soul casting (?) will probably draw some eyes for sure.

Raymond Howard

😂😂😂 I wouldn't be able to stop laughing if that happened

Cyrus McEnnis

So, is that confirmation of an upcoming Desert Island arc? >.>

LucasTheLost

Little does she know she's already succeeded, which makes the whole situation hilarious.

LucasTheLost

The beating from MassDriver was a pretty solid loss, and inside his lair too, but sans armor. The next time they showed up (and with the same mix of powers, MISTAKE) MD and Co quite rightly got their clock cleaned. Gotta switch things up to keep'em guessing. Beating Brain-in-a-jar Man in his lair was a bit much. Breaker tying up MD was pretty obvious, do despite beating an obviously superior super didn't strike me as odd like beating the brain did.

Kabir Kumar

That was a loss, but when it was overturned so quickly and easily, it doesn't feel very important. What were the consequences of that? Perry and his team defeated one of his father's rivals, several older supers. Doesn't feel like a loss. Even then, turning a loss into a victory can be fun to read, but for me, with how easily and quickly it was done, it was almost like Perry got bit by an insect and then squashed it, rather than getting soundly beaten and then getting back at his assailants. Thing is, Perry has had more dramatic losses and comebacks before- like when Chemestro made him fall out of his suit. The ease with which Chemestro did that and the difficulty Perry had just surviving after it made Chemestro feel like an actual threat and an interesting character- whilst also making Perry's struggle interesting. But who's going to see Mass-Driver and Neutrino as powerful characters or threats with how easily they were beaten?

Jeanean

@Kabir Kumar! I think you are missing a few things here. Perry mostly looks like he is never "loosing" because he is a Wizard and Tinker, both of which rely on being prepared. So, if he is the one initiating a confrontation, you can be damn sure that he is fully prepared and damn near guaranteed to win. On the other hand, that also includes being prepared for getting beaten half to death and getting his lair smashed. Aside from that, Perry has mostly been newbi hunting, which is super low risk. Or he was on the wall or train where he has support and a secure fallback point, never mind that he almost died when Chemestro dropped him out of his armor. Or he was trapped in a never ending series of gameshows, a point from where things could only ever get better. Or there was that situation with the giant bees, where that flying guy almost died. Or, you know, that time when Heathers dad almost killed her. It's really only because of the lighthearted way the story is being told that it seems like there is no risk, combined with the fact that Heroes and Villains very rarely go all-out, because if they do, they would be very likely to find an angry Solaris on their doorstep.

Rutger Boll

But paint a tuxedo pattern on it! Like the tuxedo shirt!

Carl Mason

"give it a couple months and somebody's gonna be preggers." Somehow I can't help thinking it will be Perry. I know it doesn't work that way, but...