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I'm thinking about calling it Rival.exeI'm also going to change a couple things, namely having his off hand grabbing the sword behind his back implying he's ready to throw down whenever...and that's about it.What do you guys think? Look silly and fun? Anything you'd change or add?Comment below.The cover for book 2 is getting a makeover from my editor, because the faces were just...

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Eden

I love it. Rival.exe is a great name imo

Vinohr

Good name and good concept, but I feel like Billiam looks smaller than he is described

Bladehawk256

Why not Rival.zip because there was a lot to unpack!

vetro 26

Love the name. I would suggest more decoration of some kind on tyrannus as he looks a bit plane, or as much as a litteral dragon can. Maybe goggles?

PlasmaticPi

I would add some type of ball of energy in that raised claw shooting at Paradoxes back. Cause right now that claw just looks awkward instead of threatening.

Ford-Thomas Frank Loveland

I like his current pose, how about instead of a hand on the sword, have a suit hover in the backgroud

mhaj58

Maybe make some room for the babies

Sinful

You should add a New quest notification in the corner for Perry.

Hayden Leech

Thought this was todays chap ?!?! Sad. Great cover tho

Owen Kaz

I know it's not how it actually works, but having some symbols or a spell circle on Try's side would be a good indicator of him having spells of his own going on. Or maybe even on his tounge.

alex godbeer

I think the dragon needs some sort of clothing item to show that he's not just some wild animal

Tastermind

Sword around the waist maybe? Would make the hand on it less awkward I think.

alex ayala

You ever watch Spy vs Spy? I think something like that would be cool

worldly bee

I love it, but I think it needs to be brighter. It's way too dark for a book cover.

paradigmblue (edited)

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2026-09-05 04:00 The dragon needs lab goggles too.
2024-02-22 20:46

Daedalus

Doesn't Will have some massive gaudy gem armament over his chest that looks super magical and intimidating?

Big casino

Glad you are changing the hand cause tbh my first thought was why the hell is he heiling.

Big casino

A mustache and a top hat. To show how evil he is.

Selkie

Have each of them subtly trying to murder each other. The dragon's claws more sharply pointed towards Paradox, Paradox aiming a spell at the dragon under the table

Ben Tew

It's pretty dark. I'm looking it on a bench outside and can't see any of the details. They need some backlighting to make them pop.

Hunter Joseph

Idk why I thought perry had a beard by now

JumpingPotatoSack

Instead of the sword, have Perry with a finger gun out of sight of the dragon, but make it so it looks like there’s a red laser sight on the dragons chest

Chimera80

My personal concept would have them both be looking at the table - maybe one of them pointing something out, to show them working on stuff together. Then have both their off-hands prepping something, a weapon or a spell, to backstab the other.

Doodlyboy15

Would there be some way to make it seem like he's showing the vial to william while having the sword in a... reverse/downward draw on the outward side? To show that's it's sneaky? Then also maybe have William doing something too

Doodlyboy15

Yes, I had something similar imagined

Metool

William is fine, it looks like he is about to squash Perry.

STORRM

i kinda expected gold filigree on the dragon. and a bigger red like more bombastic

MurkyTruths

Only thing I would change is to have perry be giving him a playful (shoulder?) Punch

ioajfidsnmfomds77

I'd make the dragons teeth larger and more predatory

Roeland

Best cover yet and I like the outstretched hand really captures the vibe, if you wanted to capture a counterattack maybe a pernicious prison tentacle?

0x25mb@protonmail.com

I also like the peacefulness of the image without trying to fit all aspects of the arc into it. calling it rival.exe is hint enough. i like the contrast it creates!

0x25mb@protonmail.com

I like the peacefulness of the current image without trying to fit all aspects of the arc into it. calling it rival.exe is hint enough. i like the contrast it creates!

LucasTheLost

Goggles are for lesser beings.

LucasTheLost

Title suggestion: Best Frenemies Forever. And that "forever" part could be quite literal... barring any number of calamities

Academic

What's going on with perry's left hand?