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I am not late today, and it's another quite not-small chapter. Guess who's back, back again?!You can read the previous chapters in the collection.

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Addie

Omg Ned waking on EASTER. And I think he’s a KHAL now! And certainly a breaker of chains… literally. I wonder if news will leak of his survival because of the suddenly freed slaves. Will Ned have another son while he’s in Essos? I sort of trust Rickon’s certainty, but who knows what it could mean that he will have three new brothers.

ND518

Ned!! I always love a badass Ned story and this chapter delivered. I’m curious what’s he’s going to get up to in Essos.

Mand'alor The Resurrector

What a great chapter. I really like how you show that the Dothraki aren’t that great against trained warriors and shielded shielded warriors…cough cough GOT show cough cough. And DAMN did Ned go to work, I was not expecting that. And god was there a lot of births this chapter with Dany, Myrcella and Cat. Dany getting a reality check of how her life is going to be was good. Myrcella and Cat birthing at the same was funny and I am happy you had them both live. Us fans can only take so many Stark family deaths lol. And I like the foreshadowing from Rickon on what the last baby from Val and Jon is going to be. Another boy! Can’t wait to see who they name it. I could see Jon naming it Brandon after Bran but that’s about it. Maybe Aemon because he was such a big part of his previous life but that’s just asking for trouble. Or he could go with Eddard for his father or maybe Eddison for his dear old friend. And another chapter finishing with me wanting more and more.