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Chapter is bigger than I expected(over my limit again), for words just kept flowing and I didn't want to stop. Alas, it means I'm late again, and it's not fully edited (might have wonky prose or small mistakes at places).

Anyway you can read the previous chapters in the collection.

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Obligatory disclaimer: I don't own ASOIAF; that honour goes to GRRM. Edited by: Himura, and R. Yorkshireman; B. Reader: Bub3loka I also want to thank everyone for their support and encouragement. 5th Day of the 5th Moon, 299 AC Daario Naharis, Northern Myrish Heartland. "We found 'em," Mero, th...

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Rick Malone

This was a thrilling chapter! Ned in Essos, now powered by the Hungry Wolf, is a fascinating approach to his character! I think his scenes might be my favorite sections of the story. Your version of this war is unique as well. It’s interesting that so far one side of the board is so tilted against another. Minus Robb’s one victory, Renly and his forces have utterly dominated, and looked poised to continue routing the enemy. So far the Lannister/Tully/Stark side has been completely on the back foot and looking like a foolish bet to win. That said, while there’s been some foreshadowing that they’re not out of the fight yet (Tyrion basically saying that as long as he’s alive he has a chance, Ned and his fantastic army trying to get back), I worry that if we continue this route for several more chapters, it may go too far to ever believe the L/T/S forces could fight back. We’re certainly not there yet, but the alliance desperately needs another win that right now doesn’t seem anywhere in sight.

ND518

Ned’s chapters are my favorites right now. Him being a badass in Essos is amazing. I just need him to go be a badass at home. I’m really hoping to see the turn around for team Stark/Lannister because things aren’t looking good.

Cams797

Later Daario! As soon as you introduced poor Edric Wells I knew he was doomed lol. I live for the Ned chapters now, and I cannot wait for him to tell Essos to fuck itself so he can go home. I need him to actually gather up the real Wolfpack and Company of the Rose now. He’s going to have about 100,000 or more people to ship back to Westeros by the time he’s finished over there 😂. I love that Ned seems to be molding Tommen into the king Westeros needs now 😄. I hate rooting for the Lannisters, but you’ve got me doing it. Well, I still want Tywin, Cersei and Joffrey to kick it at some point, but the rest can stay. Great work!

Dhruv Bhatt

Think I’d rather see Robb turn around and go home to consolidate the North and also have his bannermen declare the North an independent kingdom. Probably take the Vale and parts of the Riverlands with them. I can see it happening as the Northmen find out that Myrcella’s child is dark haired and grey eyed, thus proving her own bastardy. It makes more sense for a “Robb is the protagonist” storyline if that’s what you’re aiming for. I’m even more interested in Faith of the Seven vs Old Gods storyline if that were to happen. Particularly with burning of the Blackwood heir and how that affects the Riverlands and the Vale.

Mafioball

The note claims that the wagon wall is a tactic of Jan Hus. It's close, relatively. Jan Hus was a preacher, burned at the stake for heresy. He built no walls. However, one of his followers, a certain Jan Žižka from Trocnov, became famous for them. By incorporating the tactic of the wagon wall, sometimes called Wagenburg (wagon fortress), he won all his battles and his followers continued to succeed. But that's the details, just please fix the title. There is even an active Hussite Church, the respected author should not risk their wrath...(exaggeration)

Mandy

I think Wylis is the Manderly with Eddard, right? In this chapter it says Wendel instead.