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Bit late again, but the chapter is thick, along with a new(old) PoV. I decided to keep storylines of lesser importance and summaries in the Zelyne's observer format, otherwise my fic will probably stretch far too much. Let me know what you think of it. You can read the previous chapters in the collection.

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Obligatory disclaimer: I don't own ASOIAF; that honour goes to GRRM. Edited by: Himura and R. Yorkshireman; B. Reader: Bub3loka I also want to thank everyone for their support and encouragement. 8th Day of the 6th Moon, 299 AC The Captain-General, Volantis Sieges were a messy affair. The attack...

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Mand'alor The Resurrector

Damn I feel bad for Aegon. It really seems like he believes he is the son of Rhaegar and Lyanna. Which is such a better use of the character than most authors use him. Most use him as an arrogant ass who knows he is a Blackfyre and is just written to be completely unlikeable. Either that or he is a top tier actor. Also it is heating up with the war. Can’t wait to see what happens next!

Mand'alor The Resurrector

Oh and thank god for the Butcher of Winterfell for saving Benjens baby. May his infamy continue to grow.

Wing

So could you clarify something. Which Sand Snakes were captured by Lys when they raided the Water Gardens? Also I wonder if the Dornish Houses will demand that the Martells pay the ransoms for the hostages since they were under their protection when they were kidnapped.

Mandy

On page 13 it says year 401 instead of 301. On page 14 one of Ned's nicknames is Slavesbane. I assume you meant Slaversbane.

Myrdin

I love the plot line of Ned rampaging throughout Essos. I can’t wait for Jon to come back from beyond the Wall and defend the North.

Aithoron

Man if the Golden Company runs into Ned the Aegon’s about to get a rude awakening.

Brynden Rivers

Tbh best fan fiction on the fandom right now, great chapter as always

Md1139

What a banger of a chapter, I binged the entire fic over two weeks. Will we see northern retaliation on the reach? Like raiding up and down the mander and putting everyone to the sword in exchange for basically launching a crusade? Anyway great chapter eagerly awaiting the next one