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Another thick chapter. On a side note, I fucking hate the Tetanus shot, don't be like me and avoid stepping on rusty nails, folks!Anyway, this, along with the previous and possibly the next two chapters are one of the most action packed chapters I have. A lot of turning points happen in a relatively short period of time, and while I want to cram everything into a single chapter, it wouldn't do it justice. I legit struggle to choose which plot to unwrap first, because so many things are happening at the same time.Anyway, I believe I'm delivering very well on my promise to keeping making the shitshow worse.That being said, you can read the previous chapters in the collection.

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Obligatory disclaimer: I don't own ASOIAF; that honour goes to GRRM. Edited by: Himura and R. Yorkshireman; B. Reader: Bub3loka I also want to thank everyone for their support and encouragement. 19th Day of the 7th Moon, 299 AC Eddard Stark, Outside of Myr Unlike Tyrosh, Lys, and Volantis, the w...

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Mand'alor The Resurrector

What a great chapter. Seeing the progression of where Ned is and how close he is to get home is great. Easily the best part was the single combat, great work in the scene. And I really like how you have been writing Garlan, very interested in seeing him progress as the new honorable knight of his time. I got an idea of who kidnapped Marge and I am hoping it’s them and not the only other group because it would be bad otherwise. RIP Brienne. The gates are finally down and I can see the ending of this phase of the war to end in the next 2-3 chapters and the war of Aegon Targaryen to begin. Also I have a feeling Theon is dying in next chapter to Nymeria.

Addie

That Myrish lady was ready to risk it all for a night with Ned! I know Cat would be fuming. Garlan really said “I’m bringing honor BACK” and he meant it! Farewell to Brienne and the Blackfish 💔 My jaw dropped at the wildfire somehow letting Renly into the city. Joffrey flaming the fires of conflict with the maesters made me laugh because of COURSE he did! I have a feeling the citadel is going to have some explaining to do.. Did Illyrio take Margaery in hopes of snagging a better alliance for “Aegon”?

Daniel Persson

The duel was such a treat to read, easily understood, you have come a long way as a writer, action scenes, dialogue, all the damm names to keep track of, yummy yummy, this world feels enormous and lived in and ofcourse Garlan is Ace, not surprising. , a tiny nitpick, Brienne was in Kingslanding guarding Renly in the previous chapter, the Bulwer kingsguards one and now shes all the way in the marches? Que paso? " Bulwer was in no mood for sparring so after leaving Renly in Briennes overly large hands..." paraphrasing