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Another very long and very eventful chapter. It's also suitably late. I'm dead tired, so forgive me any mistakes. Lots of people die in a suitable ASOIAF fashion, so enjoy (or try and poke me with a pitchfork or something). You can read the previous chapters in the collection.

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Obligatory disclaimer: I don't own ASOIAF; that honour goes to GRRM. Edited by: Himura and R. Yorkshireman; B. Reader: Bub3loka I also want to thank everyone for their support and encouragement. 2nd Day of the 8th Moon, 299 AC Kevan Lannister, the Red Keep "Where's Pycelle?" The pale handmaids t...

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Mand'alor The Resurrector

Damn what a chapter. Was not expecting all that death. Nor did I expect queen Shireen and King Consort Tommen, though considering Shireen is one of your favorites I should have realized. And god damn did I also cry when you killed Arya. Tragic. That only means Theon is going to wish that Ramsey is still alive after Jon gets his hands on him. Because Ramsey’s care is going to feel like a vacation compared to what Jon is going to do to him. I did not see Myrcella finding the truth out at all. That surprised me. Just FYI when this gets posted you are going to stir up a lot of shit on AO3 and fanfiction from reviews people are not going to like Arya dying lol.

Addie

I’m actually devastated to hear about Tywin 😭 Joffrey naming an actual Baratheon his heir? Maybe the Old Gods WERE there. Tywin naming Robb Warden of the West and one of his kids as the heir…he has his favorites and that’s clear. My heart broke for Kevan though. His kids weren’t even considered and with them being sick… well.. 😭

Trevor macDonald

Crazy chapter. Theon and whatever drumm killed Arya better get slow deaths for what they did. (I was looking forward to the Jon/Arya reunion) Tywin is finally dead. gotta admit I was waiting for it to happen, never saw him getting out of the siege/plauge alive. I wonder if Aegon and Robb will eventually meet in the reach. I see most of the reach lords left (Tarly / Garlan) will most likely join Aegon due to him having all their women and the fact that Renly is doomed.

Kana

This was really nice. The northmen seeing Jon and the giants was super exciting. Arya dying is entirely understandable, and i applaud your courage to do it this way. Theon is going to die, Balon is going to die, Yara is going to die. I'm fairly certain Jon and Eddard won't stop until the Greyjoy name is removed from history.

Phnglui mglw'nafh R'lyeh

Thanks for the chapter. Arya in cannon had battleship grade plot armor, she got training from Syrio then she got the services of a Faceless Man and finally was trained as one. She was way too reckless to live. I do feel sorry for the clansmen that died trying to rescue her dumb ass.

Archimedes

Poor Arya. I'm not sure about anyone else but I expect her to die in canon as well.

Alex

Welp Jon is going to put the fear of the Old Gods in quite a few people. If not just about everyone.

Addie

Just now finished the chapter! Myrcella is officially a Stark after this chapter! She knows even the deepest secrets of her family. I feel for the hard choices she has to make and I swear I see some of Tywin Lannister when she’s deciding what’s best for everyone. The reunion between Rickon and Jon was wonderful. But I feel terrible for Rickon. He really tried to get help for Arya but she was way too defiant for her own good. I had the thought that maybe Melisandre would be able to resurrect Arya but I don’t think it’s happening. I think killing Arya will make Jon reluctant to take any hostages so Desmera Redwyne I’d hold on to my head if I were you!

ND518

Wow Arya’s moment was a GOT level shock. I was hoping she would get to learn from her mistakes but I guess not. Jon is going to rain death and destruction on Theon’s head for this.

Grimgoth

You've already "gently" prepared us for Arya's fate in the previous chapters...but I think this is one of the few fics I've read that really does it. Jon will have a good sad reunion with Nymeria/second life Arya, with a lot of sulking I hope. *shudder* Jon is going to go nuclear on the Ironborn...Theon...oh...Theon...the fate of anyone with even a drop of Ironborn blood looks grim. And Mister Drumm is so fucked...hehe the hungry wolf has a second "host"....can one make wishes? I prefer the "blood eagle" for selected Ironborn and the Reachers who invited them in the north.

Senseo

You killed Arya... you killed... !!! I congratulate you for having the balls- nevermind, you're worse than Hitler!!!

suspicious

Outstanding performance on this one. I've read so many fanfics over the years that I'm hardly surprised any longer, but you've managed it in the most pleasant ways. In CoF by the way as well. Writing looks crisp as always. I think we're all looking forward to how Jon will satiate his bloodlust now. I think Shireen is getting a lot more goodwill than she would've gotten realistically, but it's your story and I'm not really vexed, it's just that her struggle seems less tangible then that of Jon to my eyes who had to carve out his destiny with his own bloodied hands. Anyways, before I start to ramble on even further wishing you the best and eagerly waiting for more (CoF as well!)