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Chapter 80 of Shrouded Destiny (SD) is out for Squires! (Patreon)

Published:
2024-09-09 00:17:47
Edited:
2024-09-16 07:14:01
Imported:
2026-06
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A long chapter. Probably not what most you expected. It's a bit unedited (all of my beta-readers have been busy, and RL has been kicking my arse very effectively the last month). Shit happens. 79 has undertaken significant edits from the og release in the Val PoV, but I'm once again not satisfied with how the current chapter came out despite devoting two days on it (though it might just be me writing while sleepy again). Anyway, you can read the prev chapters in the collection.

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Obligatory disclaimer: I don't own ASOIAF; that honour goes to GRRM. Edited by: Himura and R. Yorkshireman; B. Reader: Bub3loka I also want to thank everyone for their support and encouragement. 8th Day of the 8th Moon, 299 AC Lord Paxter Redwyne, Torrhen's Square While sufficiently defensible...

Comments

Kage

Damn RIP Theon, honestly wished he was blood eagled but thats just me. Felt smaller then usual, but that might have been my eagerness to read this chapter. Glad to see that Jon is slowly making his way to Winterfell.

Addie

I wonder if Robb and Garlan will hook up because of their mutual outrage with Aegon Sand? What a rough way to go for Margaery… but what happened to her ladies? Jon’s ambush was marvelous! Theon died too quickly but we can’t have everything. I CANT believe I didn’t connect that Desmera’s dad is in the north! I think Jon has found a way to kill the Hightowers marching around the North.. Is Desmera pregnant? I’m suspicious of her septa giving her moon tea. So “King” Greyjoy might have a grandchild even if his daughter and son have been killed! Deserved btw. They were both fools and I don’t grieve them at all. I wonder if Jon’s comment about Desmera’s claim to the Redwyne seat means very bad news for the other Redwynes.. I fear what Catelyn would do with those septa’s… they came to invade the north and now her daughter’s bones are being sent to her. The Weirwoods growing thanks to all that carnage makes so much sense to me! The rest of the realm is such a disaster! And it sounds like things in Essos are only getting hotter instead of calming down

Addie

Btw I love this chapter and the previous one! Idk what you’re talking about in your notes 😭 they’re so good! I hope you take a ten hour sleep!

Ambrose Young

Amazing chapter! I had written a whole bookexplaining why and then my phone glitches. Anyway have you given any thought to lands for Jon and Val? Will he keep Red Rain for his new house? And can't wait to see Balon find out his last kids are dead.

Rick Malone

I love the mind of delusional characters like Paxter, who’s just assuming their upcoming victory in the North…you know, that place that no southerner has held in thousands of years. It’s an interesting point in the story insofar that no one is really winning? Seriously, what character is in a place that would considered a positive for them?

Based_Bass

Man Jon didn’t even fuck around…it was just on sight with Theon. Well done. Also Desmera really needs to quit those delusions before Val gets motivated. As much as the Tyrells/Hightowers/Redwynes deserve everything that’s coming to them I feel bad for Garlan. We already knew shit wasn’t going to be pretty but man Margaery really didn’t deserve that. I’ve said before and I’ll say again I cannot wait until Aegon meets either Robb or Ned and tries his “I’m your kin” BS.

Kana

Very satisfying end to Theon, uninportant just as he was in life.

Trevor macDonald

Great chapter again. You always come through. I feel like the Wyl bastard fucked it up for Aegon. still not sure what happened to the rest of the ladies from the Stormlands and the Reach but Aegon could have switched the loyalty of those lords if he had their daughters as hostages and treated them decently (I'm guessing the others were probably raped if what they did to Margery was any indication). A little disappointed with the quickness of Theon's death hopefully, Balon gets a more gruesome end. Paxter and Baelor are idiots, putting everything on taking Winterfell while a northern army lays unopposed in the Reach. Wonder if Jon tries to reach out to Redwyne now that he has his daughter.