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Here comes the climax and my longest chapter to date! Not the climax you expected, but still a climax regardless. A heavy chapter, I'm not entirely happy with it and will probably do a blanket edit for polish later on, so feel free to critique/comment. On the same note, chapter 92 Jon/Robb/Ned interaction has been heavily polished and should read better.You can read the previous chapters in the collection.

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Obligatory disclaimer: I don't own ASOIAF; that honour goes to GRRM. Edited by: Himura and R. Yorkshireman; B. Reader: Bub3loka I also want to thank everyone for their support and encouragement. 12th Day of the 8th Moon, 300 AC Ser Barristan the Bold Three days of tense anticipation as envoys w...

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Kryn_Womble

I’m glad it turned out this way, the Starks get to drop an existential nuke on FAegon’s identity, not have another battle with a Northern Sweep and we still get to watch the bloodthirsty parasites tear each other to shreds!

VishihaHitachi

At least Barristan can die like a knight with sword in hand

Liima1

The chapter was awesome

זאב ברנזון

I hope to get a decent explanation about the different factions inside the false king's army I suspect the stony dornish being the most westerose normal adjacent And having a very dark and bloody legacy fighting against black fire pretenders Unexploded the situation and trying to kill the sell swords at the same time Quentin is a disgusting turn clock and is trying to get rid of his sister and and her now useless husband The strom lords are just opportunistic and share hatred of the blackfire

Alastor999

I was actually hoping for this kind of resolution as I kind of liked Aegon. He’s a victim too and is a decent man, I did not want him to die

gigamans

Was really concerned with how things were playing out that Aegon would never hear the truth right from Lord Stark and Jon, glad to see I was wrong. This has been a scene, maybe THE scene I've been looking forward to for like 50? chapters, ever since Varys told Barristan that Lyanna's child was alive. This is peak FAegon, I can't stand stories that write him like a Targaryen Joffrey. In the books the scary/interesting thing about him is how competent and likeable he seems from the little we see of him. Great stuff big G

Omar Syed

Have to be honest. This chapter started off interesting and then turned into 'meh' at the very end. Have enjoyed most chapters to one extent or another, even the ones that I didn't think I would enjoy (filler chapters or the like, I like action mostly), but this one's end left me disappointed for some reason. Enjoyed the pseudo tête-à-tête between FAegon and the Starks. Would have liked more build-up for the chaos/betrayal that FAegon's choice immediately led to. I don't dislike the chapter, just feel like there should have been more intriguing of FAegon's before the whole thing unraveled. Maybe we'll get to read more on that in the next chapter.

ND518

Yay!! I loved your Aegon and was hoping another decent man wasn’t trampled by war and lies. I hope he set himself a nice little fiefdom in Essos. I also hope the Martels are well and truly fucked after this debacle.

Jacob Hall

Love that Doran and his ilk are getting their just deserts and I'm glad that we didn't see more needless bloodshed. I genuinely feel bad for Aegon here, his whole life he has been lied to and when he finally meets his supposed kin his entire worldview is shattered. Robb is right though Aegon showed more honor and courage here then most of the knights and pius lords ever would, although I'm worried what Connington and Quentyn will try, I've been headcannonibg that Quentyn does something stupid and Robb kills him and Cuntington is desperate for a fight with Ned to avenge his silver prince.

Daydream

I really liked this chapter, with Barristans surety turns to turmoil. I feel like it fits aegon's character he's always tried to preserve life and was getting more and more disillusioned with westeros

george zuki

I won’t lie this was messy as hell like damn , can’t you keep a secret Jon connington

Based_Bass

Fantastic chapter. Wow Aegon is really a good dude. I mean I knew it but you really hammered it home here. He really kept good on his promise, and immediately went back and told his followers the truth. Robb is right; the guy is more honorable and decent than literally most of the great lords and knights of Westeros. You were also right…Varys and Illyrio did a far better job with him than they probably wanted or expected to. If that’s not ironic comedy I don’t know what is. On a more personal note…I feel for Aegon regarding Illyrio. He had a father that quite literally couldn’t be assed to have a sing face to fact conversation. Just used him as a pawn to gain control over a country…that he didn’t even care about or live in. I always thought that was one of the most fucked up parts about his story. He just got treated like a mushroom.

Garri Sarkisov

Wow unexpected but honorable chapter