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Welp, finally back to a more moderately-sized chapters. One final bit of action. And thus ends Shrouded Destiny's main storyline. Next will be the epilogues*(no more than three of them this time, gotta downsize a bit!)I might have missed some things, but I believe I covered most of the things without diving too much into minutia. This ending feels like a far bigger struggle to write than DW's one, but considering the changes are far more drastic, it shouldn't be such a surprise. Let me know what you think!Spoiler alert - new political map of Westeros(obviously the small territorial details are often wrong and dubious at best, but it indicates the large changes in the kingdoms the best)!That being said you can read the previous chapters in the collection!

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Obligatory disclaimer: I don't own ASOIAF; that honour goes to GRRM. Edited by: Himura and R. Yorkshireman; B. Reader: Bub3loka I also want to thank everyone for their support and encouragement. 13th Day of the 9th Moon, 300 AC Ser Barristan Selmy, the Blackfyre camp near the Golden Bridge Ther...

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Velyndin1989

Nice! What happened to Gendry?

MehOhWell

I gotta say, this story was totally worth subscribing for. I also love to see a fanfic where Jon is genuinely a cunning uber-badass but still wise enough to not take a crown. Cuz ffffffffffffuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck that shit. Better to just head home a start making a small legion of Wargs with his barbarian-queen wife.

Bertram K Reese

Great way to end it I hope you take a break before you start the next one

Based_Bass

I’m imagining Val in the King’s court. HAH! They really wouldn’t be ready for a barbarian queen.

Addie

Omg it’s fantastic that we got Jon as Regent for a time! I’m sure he made everyone regret forcing him down south with their rebellions LMAO I felt like Ned made the hard but pragmatic choice by sticking with Tommen as King. I never considered he’d expose his parentage seriously, it just wouldn’t be the right choice. It makes sense he would choose to burden himself and his circle with the truth to spare the lives of thousands more. Of course it breaks my heart a little that it clearly wore him down so much.. but Ned has been hard at work since chapter one! He deserves to retire and go home at last. The Martells really lost in a big way! I’m surprised the Tully’s got such high honors but I guess they really expended a lot of resources for Tommen’s throne. Can’t wait for the next part and the new story you’ve got cooking

Eric Lachance

It's Nature vs Nurture. Certainly, Tommen is born of awful circumstances, but he seemed to be of sound mind and was molded into someone of character by Eddard. Edit: Hopefully Ned is rid of his ancestor's pestering.

Tiberius JK

Looking over the map, couldn't help but notice that the Isle is Faces is gray - slick.

SwiftFate

Not gonna lie, I kind of lost interest in this series as it moved away from Jon. Was looking for moremof a jon-centric empire building type story but it didn't really tickle those needs. That being said, it was well written and something to read on the side. But I think I'm done with asoif fics for a while. Been craving more Harry Potter stories and DC inserts. Thanks for your work mate

Patrick Perrault

I'm impressed with this ending. This fic was huge and you managed to end it satisfactorily. Great work.

Herr_Merkel

I love the way you ended things. You have a great way of writing historians and their thoughts.

Omar Syed

A much better filler chapter than the last one. I especially enjoyed the talk between Jon Steelsong and Aegon Blackfyre. Also found the afterword enjoyable. But now I'm waiting for the last parts of Jon's story. And what about Garland?