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Chapter 10 of No Joy in Command is out for Squires! (Patreon)

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2025-03-10 06:00:25
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2026-06
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Slightly late, but I'm happy with how this one came out. The plot thickens, almost like cheese does. Let me know your thoughts.You can read the previous chapters in the collection!

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Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction based on the ASOIAF universe. All recognisable characters, plots, and settings are the exclusive property of GRRM; I make no claim to ownership. Edited by: Bub3loka Year 129 After Aegon's Conquest Jon Stark Renting more pastures and even a chunk of the coas...

Comments

Lucion

Well, season 1 is done. Let's see how long Jon keeps denying his need to preserve some dragons.

aiwonder

I don’t really care how this goes, as I love every moment of it, I just have one request….. in the end please let it be that the targs are the only dragon riding family. The fact Rhaenys didn’t marry Viserys is the first step in the dilution of power and the catalyst to the dance. Corlys hustled the targs immaculately.

MehOhWell

It’s genuinely refreshing to see how little Jon cares about all the Targ bullshit beyond the fact that they’re taxing him more. I do believe he’s become the spirit animal of many. Also, I do rather regret that he didn’t end up being (begrudgingly) sent north as part of the envoy so he could find baby Ghost II. Would have been fun but I think the current situation makes for better entertainment value.

Cristi R

Tbh I find myself a bit disappointed. This is the second week in which nothing notable happens. Furthermore I'm starting to doubt the intention of keeping NJIC to half of SD. For example the interaction between Jon and Ser Alfred Broome could be condensed in half a page, yet you went with almost 3 pages trying to "show" more then "tell" what is happening outside Jon's ivory tower (same shit as before). I want to see the ripples Jon's actions make. True, so far he isn't in a position to make changes to how events went the first time, however I think a conversation between Otto and Larys regarding Jon's possible status as a bastard of Viserys would be nice. When counting dragons for the Blacks, as far as everyone else knows, Jon is a weak maybe, weaker then Rhaena, but still a good strategist would not ignore the possibility. Yes, maybe the cheese maker is a spy for the Greens, but in that case I think it's better to make the reader wonder. Show a conversation between Otto and Larys, mention a spy, then add the same amount of description for each new hire in Jon's extended house, so that any one of them could be it.

khalid musadak

The hedonism of Jon while Interesting at first is becoming to much. Where is the ambition ?

stevem1

I enjoyed the chapter. Broome is becoming a halfway friend to Jon, which is good. Isolation is overrated. Jon expanding into cheesemaking is hilarious. Rather than fight, he’s decided to become a wealthy burgher. There are worse fates. Rhaenyra is grinding the smallfolk under her boot. Probably without intending to do. I doubt she spared them a thought. At this point, Jon is more attuned to the smallfolk’s needs then their putative princess. Thanks for writing. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

VishihaHitachi

This time Ser Broome just might betray Rhaenyra for Jon cause he think a man like that is better than her and he can say i know the future King, train with him, eat from his bounty ......

Alex

A fun chapter, nice to see Jon making friends. Now I know it’s early in the morning for me. But I don’t remember at all what Nettles did. That would make her run off.

julio meza

I’m a bit disappointed with this chapter, your other fanfics had me waiting for updates but it’s the second week were I struggle to want to read, is it going to continue to be this slow? A lot of the info could have been a few paragraphs.

ModNsparksPhilo22

Another wonderful chapter - enjoy how it doesn’t rush into pushing Jon into action but slowly develops his reasoning. I don’t begrudge his apathy (especially with how inevitable the long night is from his perspective). Would be interesting to see what (if any) events push him to become involved

Maniac000

Best thing about this story is how much distance Jon is trying to keep from the historical events. Every other fic would already have him in the thick of it trying to change history. And that he’s not trying to convince ppl he’s from the future. Now, my prediction, I think Rhaena will claim Silverwing in this.

Based_Bass

Binged this whole series just now. I’m absolutely loving it. I’m betting the thing to fire Jon up is going to be his inevitable throw down with that Kraken. That tentacled asshole has been campaigning for an asswhooping and he’s gonna get elected.