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Not as late as last week for all the good it would do. I was tempted to go into greater, grislier details, but I decided against it. Anyway, lemme know what you think.WebsiteGoogle Docs.Google Docs link will be scrubbed once leaked.

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Jeremiah

Well, didn’t expect that to happen to Jon

FallenMetalGod

Thank you, and I have to say Jon got out quickly and right; hopefully, this won't come back to bite him. However, I am happy that we get to meet a young Tomund. It will be amusing how Jon will influence Tomund without intending to. However, it seems like Jon got himself a dire wolf company again, which makes me happy. I am impressed to see Rhaella's growth, especially in buying an inn to gain more information. I do hope we see her continue to expand her web, becoming the next Bloodraven and Seastar. Great job as always, and I'm probably overstepping, but I feel like you could do an amazing Witcher story or a Witcher crossover with either Harry Potter or A Song of Ice and Fire. I'm eager to see how things unfold.

Lord Sturm

Lol. I think that Jon just conceived future King beyond Wall / Half-Other hybrid...

Ausar the vile

Excellent chapter. I wonder how these two are gonna get together they seem to be dancing on a different line across the continent it’ll be interesting when they finally meet, how many chapters do you think until then? Seems Jon’s on his way south he could get stopped a lot