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That was surprisingly long chapter. I could have stopped at a certain place, but I wanted to write more and more until I was satisfied. There are still some things to be touched upon, and I'll probably adress them on a later edit. Lemme know what you think. Without further ado:WebsiteGoogle Docs

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Lesion

Great chapter bro! Loved seeing Voldemort’s pov throughout the first half of the chapter especially with his plans failing because of Dumbledore lmao. I liked seeing the ICW and their mages like the sun mages which was a cool addition. I can’t wait to see the kind of chaos Voldemort will cause with his new recruiting methods lol. Ron having girl problems was funny af.

gigamans

It would be more believable if people started flocking to Emberwick due to the ideas he spoke about in the media if it was someone other than Emberwick. It just seems difficult to believe that a population of people would think that he's genuine in his desire to promote the good of Wizardkind after he's apparently spent years doing nothing but pyromania resulting in entire villages being wiped out. Like sure, the idea is great for them. I just don't know why they think he would be genuine in his desire to give it to them? A guy who is murdering you for sport and sending werewolfs into your settlements does not care about your wellbeing. Chapter was fantastic though, good to see the ICW is actually somewhat useful rather than how they're usually portrayed in stories.

Eragon The Greater

Nice chapter. The idea is certainly a good one. Looking forward even more to what you can cook up!

Loki's Brand

Yeah, it's an uphill battle for Emberwick and Voldemort to sell this to the masses, but never underestimate the power of greed to override common sense. Especially once people see him actually fulfilling his promise in his territory. At that point, they'll have proof that he's serious, and the floodgates will open for recruitment. Unless the ministries get on this right away and start essentially offering the same thing to counterbalance the situation, this will be a big problem for the ICW.

Loki's Brand

I love that Ron is low-key turning into a harem protagonist and doesn't even realize it yet.

Dixon Yermauth

Love the unique take on ron in this story. He is usually such a lame stereotype character in fanfiction. Either bestest fweend of lapdogy loyalty, or evelist jealousy meany of doom and betrayal. This version is awesome. I can just see him become something like a wizard-beserker who just focuses on shields and dogding to get in close and then fucking brain the badies with his fuckoff magic axe :D

matt sinco

Ron will have to marry both Luna and Astoria, it's only right after giving him a magical axe. He will be the literal muscle behind Harry and Juno that has two honies waiting for him at home

natio

Voldemort seems almost immune to negative effects of rituals beyond his reasoning being a little bit crappier. Guessing Serris the Basilisk conveyed Salazar Slytherin's understanding of rituals. Nice to see the progress Harry and Juno have achieved from the perspective of Voldemort. Maybe Voldemort's lack of alarm of their progress is from the negative effect of the rituals...

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Is convergence no longer on an every two weeks update schedule?