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Chapter 32 of Broken Dreams + Rhaella portrait. (Patreon)

Published:
2026-03-21 07:32:56
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2026-03-21 07:33:18
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2026-03
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The chapter was hard to write but surprisingly fulfilling, even though it's a bit of a transition/interlude. There are no time-skips yet, as people expected, but they should come soon (in about two chapters).Without further ado:WebsiteGoogle Docs

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Maurogatos

For some reason I really disslike how you portrayed this King Aegon! Even when I have read the novelas, I didn’t expect him to be so … close minded and incompetent! Plus the whole Melisandre being so close to him with out a real explanation how she is there in that period of time is somewhat annoying for me ! I don’t know where the plot is going ! But truth be told , Jon is somewhat useless in this Fic You gave him Op characters close to him but that’s all ! He does not explore his magic.. he don’t talk with the princess about magic … he just going left and right like a dog ! He has no plans and no ambitions for him self and he really seems lost as a character !! I guess he is not the real Mc Maybe there is no real Mc in this story But having a Jon with all this knowledge and being so …. Passive , is annoying to read !

FallenMetalGod

Thank you, and I like how Jon will hopefully create a spy network. I like the idea of combining Bloodraven's and Spider's abilities to create a massive spy network throughout the whole because of what Jon did. It's cool that Jon met Davos so early. I hope Davos will become Jon's right or left hand over time. Great job as always, and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Lesion

Great chapter! Loved reading Aegon’s pov and seeing how the war is starting to ramp up. I was surprised and excited to see Jon meet Davos, hopefully we will see him join Jon’s band. The interactions between Jon and Arthur is so wholesome and satisfying. Arthur is slowly becoming the kind of knight that’s he always meant to be in the future. I wonder who Daeron was talking about at the end of the chapter. Still holding onto hope that Barristan will one day make an appearance🙏🏼

Myrdin

Shiera Seastar should still be around at this point, whether openly or as Quaithe (if we go that theory route). She should be interested in meeting the second Bloodraven