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Chapter 33 of Broken Dreams is out for Squires! (Patreon)

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2026-04-09 23:19:01
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2026-04
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Due to irl issues and rising stress levels, I've been in quite the pickle as of late, and it's been a struggle to find the peace of mind to sit down and write. Will make an announcement about changes in my release schedule next week.Anyway, without further ado, here's the chapter (longer than I planned, but I don't think anyone would complain about that):WebsiteGoogle Docs

Comments

ND518

This is like a mystery and I’m curious who is behind the plots - both the drug and the green tourney

FallenMetalGod

Thank you, and I have to agree, Branda's POV was very interesting, especially the feeling she has about Jon. I am curious if whatever is held within Jon is felt by Branda, whatever is whispering to Jon. I am happy seeing Jon is spreading his web and eyes across the city, mixing Varys and Blood Ravens techniques for his little ravens. Someone from the past is calling. I am curious what Jon will get from that meeting. Nice reference to the Storm God; I always enjoy seeing older religions mentioned in A Song of Ice and Fire. It seems like the enemies are starting to move, and it looks like it's time for Jon to go hunting. We got future Blackfish who could be joining the party, and I am all for it. Great job as always, and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Eragon The Greater

Dude, the last thing any of us want is for you to burn out and leave a story unfinished. If you need to take time do it. This has been a couple months or so of you having difficulty hitting your schedule. A refresh may be due

Lotus92

Ngl I kind starting to like Johanna the longer the story goes on. The backstory with Blackfish lost love as his brother wife puts their relationship and Hoster insistance to marry into whole new context.

Lesion

Amazing chapter bro! Loved Branda’s pov on everything so far. Hopefully we get Arthur or Joanna’s pov throughout the story. I wonder if Melisandre is the one behind the Green Tourney. Praying that everything gets better for you bro🙏🏼

Michael A

Sorry to hear that you're having IRL issues. Don't feel bad if you have to step away from writing for a bit to focus on real life stuff, I'd much rather a delay in your stories than see you get burnt out.