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Chapter 40 of Broken Dreams is out for Squires! (Patreon)

Published:
2026-07-14 23:11:45
Edited:
2026-07-14 23:12:26
Imported:
2026-07
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That took longer than I expected. I know some people aren't happy with some of the developments in the previous chapter, but, in the end, I did foreshadow it faintly from the very start. SI done well (and reasonably) is no different from any other literary tool, like time travel or cross-over, and I never meant to delve into that character in particular, merely the consequences of his presence and actions, which I find far more interesting.Anyway, without further ado:WebsiteGoogle Docs

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Jules

Aerys slowly becoming a goat, didn’t expect it but I’m so here for it

Yeno Memevig

Alright where's Mel now? The siblings are in a really shitty spot. Rhae get yourself together.

Lesion

Great chapter bro. Seeing Aerys slowly grow into a good king is very satisfying. Hopefully Aegon isn’t dead but I wouldn’t be surprised if he truly was. Lol knowing Jon’s luck he’s probably gonna get ambushed. The story is ramping up and I can’t wait to see Jon, Aerys and Rhaella all grow into their roles. Hoping we get to see some insight into Tywin and Barristan’s actions.

Maurogatos

From the start of the story I really disliked the character of rhaella And it just getting worse! She is the only reason I’m not excited for this story , and believe me I like your stories! Jon classic like almost every other chapter is like he is not in the story , everything happens around him but he just runs errands left and right ! Atleast aerys getting some character He is the only one who try to do something! They have enemies left and right Rhaella prefer to do nothing but dream Jon has no idea what he is doing Is like he has forgot about the others and doesn’t care who die or live … he don’t even care to take a dragon for himself some how So let’s wait for Aerys to save the story

Eragon The Greater

I believe the Others were taken care of in the early chapters when he stabbed Longclaw into a black stone and took the backlash. It's been some time since then but it was chapter 2-5ish

username259618

Same man, I don’t see book Jon anywhere in this story, it seems like he is in his own world, somehow is not able to notice people getting killed across the city or even know it even though he says he can control dozens of animals, this might seem like a rant but I am able to suspend belief in most of his stories because I can say eldritch magic shenanigans but bringing an SI into it too removes that immersion and makes it seem like a mukbang of multiple story ideas. I bought a sub to read this and give it a try but honestly feels like he dropped the ball, but anyways I’ll be reading the next 3-4 chaps to see the direction before I drop it.

Colin

Yes it's a literary device but it's one you very well know is a complete dealbreaker for a lot of people, myself included. You very knowingly let us invest a lot of time, money and interest into this story while knowing a lot of us will drop it solely because of that instead of just adding the tag or saying it plainly. I'm super disappointed in you because you are by far the patreon i have supported the most ever and now it turns out you treat us with so little respect.