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Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction based on the Harry Potter universe. All recognisable characters, plots, and settings are the exclusive property of Joanne K. Rowling. I make no claim to ownership. Edited by: Void Uzumaki and Ashestodust; B. Read: Bub3loka 1st of September Harry's shirt was...

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Rick Malone

Can’t remember if you addressed this earlier, but please don’t let Harry grow up and still be the smallest kid in his year.

Chris

I am a total sucker for these kinds of fics. Please update quickly!! :) I enjoy any sort of hard magic system where Harry starts to discover some of the more subtitlies that govern magic and that makes his power earned. However I am not sold on OCs. She seems like another Hermione? I am confused what role she serves in the story. Keep up the cool story!

Maurogatos

hmm so ... about the OC girl Dianna!! not a bad idea but i found her character childish ! I hope she gets better cause now she is something like hermione and ron at first year and not the good way !! yea i get she is only 11 but to chilidish and maybe to much part of the chapter for her POV ! overall I liked her but she needs work... especially when Harry has a mentality almost of a adult

Garri Sarkisov

Is this OC Hermione replacement or fully newly created OC to be additional new friend that Harry does not have history with or knowledge of?