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Chapter 13 of 'Shrouded Destiny' is out for Squires! (Patreon)

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2023-05-28 05:10:52
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2026-06

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Obligatory disclaimer: I don't own ASOIAF; that honour goes to GRRM. Edited by: yours truly so expect some mistakes; B. Reader: Bub3loka I also want to thank everyone for their support and encouragement. 2nd Day of the 5th Moon Robert Baratheon, the First of his Name The king awoke, and his t...

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vb

Good chapter. It’s funny to see Robert see sense on matters where the simple truth is spoken. Plus, it doesn’t involve Targaryens so he’s not blinded by a last name there. Also an interesting decision to have Jon only be able to take canines/wolves with skinchanging. Personally I like the bird/rodent side of it more, but that’s just a pro/con of being strong with spying vs warfare, and Jon has fought battles his entire life so it fits even if I’d rather the chains on skinchanging not be there. Excited for the next chapter. Hope it’s another Jon one or a pov from his group

MyAfroAteMyDog

Damn good chapter. I guess jon will have to be king beyond the wall now

JaxonGold

I just reread through all the chapters so far. So decided to make a mega comment of everything I’m wondering/ questioning/ looking forward to finding out. 1. Jon sent the giant snow bear skin to Winterfell, will Ned make it a gift from Job to Robb for his wedding? 2. Elia was pregnant, so unless the “babe of two” was Aegon come early, then no Faegon in the south this time? Or at least a MUCH harder tale to spin for Varys. Or female Faegon? I guess Frhaenys? 3. Also is Daenerys even ever born?! Did her mom make it to Essos too as she wasn’t pregnant and will that affect Viserys’s madness? 4. Ned has made a few comments about telling Robb of Jons letter, and with him going south soon I’m guessing that won’t be for much longer. And to take Robb into his/ Howland’s plans will be hella interesting. 5. Reactions of the Robb/ Myrcella engagement. I wonder if she will end up being like a counter hostage to Ned if needed? Also other engagements for his children in the north to quell a second marriage in a row to the south for the Winterfell lord? Although the half taxes and New Gift may quell that. 7. You mentioned the war won’t be the Five kings again. I wonder if it will be more the south trying to invade the north? Without the north being the predictable scapegoats/instigators I wonder if they will instead be made into a “common enemy” while the south tries to subtly backstab each other. 8. Being a direwolf warg helps Ned sense lies apparently. That could make HUGE differences for him in the south. First timeline he was a bumbling Hand, this time he could end up being seen as one of the most effective Hands ever.