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These damned chapters keep turning out longer than expected.

Chapter 28  

Chapter 27 

Chapter 26 

Chapter 25 

Chapter 24 

Chapter 23 

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Obligatory disclaimer: I don't own ASOIAF; that honour goes to GRRM. Edited by: Void Uzumaki and Himura; B. Reader: Bub3loka I also want to thank everyone for their support and encouragement. 18th Day of the 7th Moon The Heir of Winterfell He was to be a father.

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JaxonGold

Love the chapter, although I really hope we get more of Myrcella’s reaction to the cold gods, or maybe even Robb sharing more of what he knows. Getting her in the know will only help Robb assuming she doesn’t share with her old family. Love seeing more themes of Jon turning the “wildings” into be more like northmen. Also correcting the Freefolk stereotypes of “southerners” bit by bit. Still hoping that this is foreshadowing of Jon being given Moat Cailin with his host, to repair thanks to giants, once he is forced to flee south of the wall.

Addie

The lone wolf dies but the pack survives. Loved this chapter! Val and Jon get married! And even get a wedding feast! So nice to see Duncan and Dalla happy too. Myrcella is really making herself at home. I can see why it would appeal to her to have more freedom and her own influence with a court in Winterfell. It should be helpful when the Starks have to break the bad news that “btw the Others are coming and winter is gonna be mega cold this season 💙.” I don’t blame Tywin for planning for Joy or wanting informants in Winterfell. You need to look out for your family. CANT wait for the kings landing chapter.

julio meza

Love the story, hopefully Jon doesn’t end up as a lord under someone, seeing as he has excellent leadership skills. Would be too anti climatic lol

Jordan Belmont

Great chapter, I hope you can have theon get properly folded into the stark flock for all his flaws, he's a stark too even if it's not by blood. I do like you having him getting close to Arya since in a way they're alike in personality.

Jordan Belmont

I also love tywin, basically loving his blood being connected to the stark, arryn, Tully alliance. And him seeing ned as a great leader to train his grandson into a capable man. Which given what we know about the show. We know dude would've probably got along with the starks they'd just argue over the means of how you get things done