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Gwen Smit

I don’t know why, but just the sheer amount of tactical consideration in “quick left-jab to stun him and then a big follow-up right” is just quietly disconcerting. It really just drives home the whole fighting ring, what you had to learn to survive there and how much it affected you after.

Anonymous

Ok, so many things to love about this chapter. The little dude licking Ron's boots was incredible. The fondness you have of that conversation with your neighbor. The use of weed as medicine to uplift yourself, the recognition of PTSD. Buddy, I know we don't even know your name, but goddamn am I so *fucking* glad you wrote this comic. It gives me hope for myself, it gives me hope for you, and it's so incredibly helpful to see Elan from the inside. Thank you for this.

Anonymous

"Bedroom" is typoed in the first paragraph about the staph infection. Also, not sure if it's important, but the phone number on the Elon Laundry Slip isn't blurred. I'm guessing its public information (and probably dead now), but I wanted to make sure.

Anonymous

Jeez, man, what a great chapter. Well done.

Connor

Typo: "I would have literally paid them money to leave my (should be me) alone."

Connor

Also a bit below that, there's a space between I and the apostrophe in I'd a fee paragraphs down

Kim Slawson

I just called the phone number listed on that laundry slip. I don’t know why. I don’t know what I was expecting. What I got was an ordinary telco interrupt and announcement, albeit in an oddly precise tone.

Anonymous

Awesome chapter as always Joe

Anonymous

This chapter really spoke to me on the reality of the first few months after leaving an abusive environment.