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Be Right Back (Patreon)

Published:
2025-07-11 09:08:46
Edited:
2025-07-30 04:14:34
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2026-06
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When Hayley’s fiancé is deployed, she agrees to try SpadeTech’s companion clone — a synthetic stand-in to ease the loneliness.But something went wrong. Or maybe…as planned.

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Eric

Is there an answer as to what Ash saw? I assume we won't get to find out in the next chapter because it's an anthology series. The first thing I think is that it's another Jamal clone, this one designed to train Ash to accept that Hayley needs more now. A Black woman designed to replace Hayley, to be Ash's girlfriend and mistress, makes some sense within the context of this world. But the way you described Ash "Ash’s cock fit in her palm. In her mouth. Inside her — easily." and “You’re never going back to Ash’s little dick after this.” the Black woman/clone would deserve more.

Kacey Loveington

I had half a dozen ideas for the ending on this... 1. The Jamal 'Mistake' again was one of them. 2. Hayley has to approve giving the clone of herself, she chooses the most realistic modern version of herself. The Hayley Clone is a size queen! 3. A Trish Clone 'Mistake' Here to teach Ash the truth 4. Hayley approves a cuckold option of the spousal clone. And Ash awakes to find Haley and Jamal Clones in his kitchen! 5. Random Silliness - Hayley Clone is indeed waiting in the kitchen. She's perfect. She's back...And then she steps out from behind the island and she he Jamals cock swinging between her legs 6...Give Ash the Hayley he remembers and some form of happiness I think 1,2 and 4 are the obvious ones to use as an ending...but I decided to leave the ending open for now. I took the easy way out after a rough few days of people being upset with me...I might ultimately come back and right an extended ending or a mini sequel bonus post at some point.

Eric

1. My favorite...? (Despite my own sexual orientation, the power dynamic and kink/depravity of this kind of thing continues to push so many of my buttons so very hard. It helps that I don't have to see some other white guy experience it, because visually that's not a turn on for me at all.) 2. Interesting, but I feel like (5) is a better way to approach this; I just prefer the woman trying to show her white boyfriend WHY she needs what she needs, trying to seduce him into seeing things her way. It feels more collaborative done (5) than (2). Much as I am into voyeurism and appreciate a size queen who's an exhibitionist. 3. I don't know who "Trish" is, honestly. Is she Black? If so, intriguing... but I think I prefer (1) to (3), honestly. As much as I love women, and am not into gay stuff, the naughtiness and kink of (1) continues to float my boat. Submitting to a woman is sexy, but not all that *depraved* in the way that I yearn for (in erotica; in real life, it's very much enough for me) 4. I think (1) into (4) maybe makes sense. But I would want Ash to spend some time learning about himself before he gets to return to Hayley 5. I *knew* you were thinking of this. Even though I didn't write it, given your recent poll it was on my mind. As I said, it's not my thing... much as I enjoy a real BBC, the futa/shemale thing just isn't for me. I'd be more interested in a Hayley wielding a big black strap-on molded from Jamal's BBC than her having one of her own. (Which maybe doesn't make sense... but we like what we like, I guess.) (That being said, if you wanted to write (5) then I'd be very interested to read it. Or said another way, if you wanted to write a futa/shemale story, then this is *definitely* the right way to approach it, IMO.) 6. Lame. Pass.

Eric

I've already written a lot recently, sorry... BUT... I want to clarify (6): I like a happy ending as much as anybody. I just reject the idea that "happy" means, like, vanilla. To me, the ending with an edge - or "evil" ending? - has the girlfriend leaving her white boyfriend because he isn't good enough for her. One partner is hurt, loses. (Not my thing but I get that sometimes you will think a story calls for it.) The "happy ending" is simply the one where both are fulfilled. To me it doesn't, shouldn't, result in her returning to a monogamous relationship, it's not about her exploring for a while then returning to who she was before her exploration; the happy ending, to me, is when they both grow together sexually in a way that their sexual appetites are compatible, complementary. In these stories that doesn't mean if she's a size queen and he is big enough to satisfy those needs, of course. It means he pleases her in whatever way he's equipped for, and when she's in the mood for more than he can provide, then he's not pushed aside, useless; rather we give them a way to complement each other in some other way, like her being an exhibitionist and him being a voyeur. (Or him being a size queen too, if you want to explore BBC-curious white boyfriends. The latter isn't really my thing, but I can't deny I see the appeal...)

Patti Jenkins

Kacey, I can’t tell you how much I love this story…..and Jamal!!! 🔥

Mikasa

To be honest, this is the best from you. Sad that it is just a one-part story. I loved this <3

Daniel Vo Vo

Ummm... Havn't read a word...yet ( abit behind) but...do like the cover chicks boobs... Just say'n ...😉

BentForBlack

I agree that (1) is the best option. I would guess the divisive reaction to your recent exploration into white boys joining their women in kneeling for Black men would make a follow-up possible but not any time soon. Disappointing but I'll gladly take later over never.

Eric

Every time I scroll by this post, I read it like Matt Lillard from "Scream"

Pieman

I recently finished this story. I enjoyed it. Of course, I realized fairly early the the 'mistake' was intentional. While I was reading, I did wonder what would become of Ash. I thought he might be killed during his deployment, then Hayley wouldn't have to send the clone back. But then there was the little part at the end. Ash, alone for months with no explanation. But Spousal Replacement Initiative was delivered. I want to know more.

Kacey Loveington

Hi Pieman. Thanks for reading and enjoying this older classic.xx From what I remember(over a year ago now) I purposefully left the ending open for multiple different options, for if I ever decided to write a direct sequel to this. But there was no set in stone 'This happened next' chosen. It might have been another Jamal clone, to show him what his wife was now getting. It might have been a Hayley clone, to help him survive the break up, but the clone itself has size queen tendencies. It might have been a Hayley clone, but with a huge surprise between her legs. etc etc There was no set choice made, it was just left open for if I did come back and wanted to give a sequel and give myself the option to choose(or the readers to vote)

GocartMozart

I like the ending as it is currently. It's The Lady, or the Tiger by Frank R. Stockton which is one of the all time great literature stories. I have to admit that partway through I wanted her to have a reason to "turn off the safeties" and end up at the mercy off the clone. Horrified at first when she realizes what she's done, she ends up the happiest she's ever been. BUT, dominated by her friend and her friends husband great also.