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Room For More? Chapter 11 (Patreon)

Published:
2025-11-21 16:11:58
Edited:
2025-11-21 16:45:29
Imported:
2026-09
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Craig and Amber fight with the prospect of stepping back from their fantasies and kinks, or instead embracing and exploring them together and joining Shannon and Ron on a sexual odyssey.

Authors Note: I made the decision to only write the 'Shared' ending to this story. It was the version that best fit where this story had taken us in the previous 10 chapters... The alternative version, 'Stepping Back', which I was half way through writing, was just a negotiated attempt to meet people half way. But in truth, it wouldn't have been my story if I wrote that version, and it just wasn't doing it for me as I wrote it. Not everyone will like this ending. Just like many of you didn't like the route this story took beyond Chapter 5 and Shannons character. I just ask you accept that not all stories will turn out exactly as you hoped for. There are many kinks, many genres and many themes and paths...And I like to explore at times!

Warning: This chapter explores the kink of Bi-Curiosity, Group Sex and Relationship Dynamics.

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Will F

Kacey…I followed your writing over to Patreon specifically to see where this story went. I have commented on the Literotica site and this one about how disappointing it is where you took this couple, but kept my paid subscription only to read your alternate ending option…the one where Craig could also have some dignity while supporting Shannon’s exploration of something he couldn’t give to her. I wish you had been forthcoming about your intention to not complete that story line whenever that decision was made. I hope you have success in your continued writing, but I can not support stories where husbands or partners are cast aside in service of the sexual exploration. I had hoped for something more like FifthEstates the Speedo doesn’t lie, but you delivered weakness and cruelty. Good luck.

Highland Harry

This was great as always Kacey. You leant into the submissive, bi-curiosity kink but let him keep his dignity without turning it into humiliation or cruelty. As I have said in the past, I enjoy the crueler/humiliating cuckold kink. But this lighter touch worked perfectly for what the story needed. Love it I hope you continue to write YOUR stories rather than trying to please everyone(it's impossible).

Kacey Loveington

Sorry you feel that way Will. It was my intention to write both versions as I promised...But the decision was mostly made yesterday when I got half way through writing the 'Stepping Back' Version. It wasn't the stroy/ending I wanted to write and honestly hated what it was turning into with every new paragraph that was added. It made me realise that trying to crowd source a direction for a story and please as many people as I can all at once, is a terrible strategy, and I'm going to continue to create and write the story my way. So whilst I won't apologise for that, I will say that I regret if you feel misled by the promise of two endings...It just didn't work for me. Thanks for taking the time and effort to support me on here. I hope you enjoyed some of the other stories whilst you were here.

Kacey Loveington

Thank you HH, glad you enjoyed it...And it wasn't too vanilla for your cruel tastes 😆 I'm pleased with the ending. The whole process of writing Room For More? has been difficult(controversial and upsetting to many) to say the least, so getting some kind of satisfactory closure on it is a relief.

Hooked On BBC

I personally loved the story. I was a little worried with the way things went for a few chapters, but I actually thought the ending and the 4 of them together gave Craig as much, if not more, than any other scenario. 2 girls to love, fuck and share. A nice 11 inch cock to experiment with and wosrhip. And a succesful work life where he is an equal. It was a great way to tie it all up. I support those who say ignore the critiscism and keep writing your stories. Some people want these outcomes and kinks. Others don't. It's impossible to make stories that please all aspects and everyone's wishes. The mix of kinks here though all your stories meams there is something for everyone. Not Everything for someone.

Simon

I absolutely loved this story, it had absolutely everything for all types of kink and there is just something about hot tubs that makes you wonder what's going on under the surface 😉. Maybe a future story there about gyms and Leisure Centres . I love your vivid imagination keep themcoming xx

Kacey Loveington

Thanks Simon. This one was definitely a long and wild ride. Glad you liked it 😉 xx

James

I really enjoyed this story. A couple of interesting turns, including the arrival of Amber. Such hidden desires and underlying themes that some may not fully grasp or at least may not want to. Great writing and evolution of the story.

Kacey Loveington

Thank you so much James, that was really lovely to read. xx

Madcats4

I was rereading this story, and I think I've discovered the problem I have with it. Almost everything from ch6 onward is from Craig's pov. In the first 5 chapters, we get both Shannon and Craig's pov's and see Shannon's thought process as her desire grows, but we don't know what she's thinking after that. Maybe it's intentional, so we really feel Craig's angst, but I found her actions after ch5 too confusing. Although she's not so questionable in 6/7, Shannon still distances herself from Craig, as she and Ron act more like a couple and she tells Craig he's now useless in bed (which is true, but still). The real issues begin in 8/9 with the introduction of the breeding kink, Shannon telling the dinner party that the love of Craig's life left him, and the suggestion of moving on with Amber. The breeding stuff was so hot to read, especially considering she originally told Craig she wanted him to father her children, yet looking back makes it seem so sudden and cruel. Then there's the implications of her breakup comment, her lack of explanation to him, and that she keeps escalating the situation. She toys with him even when she pushes him into Amber's arms. I feel that he only acts as he does and never tries to end her relationship with Ron because he loves her so much he can't say no to her, no matter the toll on him. That's how I read the hollowness he feels in the story. Maybe my reading is off because I'm not into bi-curiosity—I don't know... In the end, while I enjoyed the early chapters, and Ron fucking Shannon, and some of the angst, the direction the story went didn't quite work for me. Seeing more of Shannon and Ron together—sexually and romantically—and from their pov's would have made this story work a lot better.