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파이브 에프

I always enjoy your work! May I ask how the progress is going so far?

Steel cook

Thank you very much. *Cakes, Sweets and Spells* will still have approximately 20 pages. As for *The Succubus Contract*, I’m not yet sure how many pages I will make, but we are already in the final arc of the story.

파이브 에프

Thank you! I'm really curious how it will end. I'll be checking back often until the story is complete.

Red Nior

I'll admit, I have to re-read it at times but I get that the witch broke laws , and treated her assistant bad, but it seems the king's own mage is making the punishment rather more hash ,on her, just my observation, I have trouble re-reading the story though patreon itself gas trouble loading and from my own writing I understand. Back to the the story at hand, she could use a hand at dismantling the house.

Cadence

do you mind clarifying what your issues are with the story itself? any feedback, positive or negative will help steer my writing in a better direction.

Red Nior

My apologies for the quick response. I wish to see that the witch does not have a complete full on immobility weight gain. As I find from the king's witch's behavior is that she is now the abuser in the story. For example, the witch was a bit rude to her assistant and the assistant snitched on her operation(whichis how she ended up in this moment) . I simply wish to not see an abusive role reveasre. ( I apologize in advance for my spelling or missing understanding of the intent of the story if it comes off thay way.) In short and I can offer it better tomorrow: I understand that the witch is to be taught lesson for her crime. I just rather not it just be a punishment & it ends like that sort of deal, this comes back from my time of seeing weight gain stories over the years. I care not for the punishment of a character that deserves it and is not given the chance of redemption. But my biggest thing is that she is not taken advantaged of. Edit: however I do absolutely enjoy the art & writing that you all do. Especially as a novice as myself in learning.