Further Reading: Honeymoon Suite (Patreon)

Every once in a while, I'll stumble across a story written by someone else that really checks all my boxes. On occasion, usually when the story is open-ended or if I feel there's room for more exploration, I'll write my own unofficial sequel or continued reading.

This is one of those stories. Written by The Pen Is Mightier on MCStories, "Honeymoon Suite" tells the story of Vanessa and Claire, two saleswomen on a road trip sales call who are forced to pull over and stay the night at a dated motel due to inclement weather on the highway. Unfortunately for them, the only room available is the Honeymoon Suite.

Read that story first for context (and because it's great) and then feel free to dive into my brief sojourn into the world created by The Pen Is Mightier.

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Futher Reading: Honeymoon Suite pt. 2, unofficial sequel

A single ribbon of light peeked through the closed curtains of the dingy motel room. The light landed perfectly on Vanessa’s face, stirring her from her sleep and bringing her back to reality.

She yawned and wiped the sleep from her eyes as she scanned her surroundings. She stretched and returned to her sleeping position in the motel bed next to her new soulmate, Claire.

The older woman watched amorously as her young protege and new lover’s chest moved up and down with each breath. She brushed a strand of hair from the brunette’s face and kissed her gently on the cheek.

Claire sighed and grabbed hold of Vanessa’s hand to place her own kiss on it.

“Good morning, my love,” Vanessa whispered into Claire’s ear.

Claire shifted her weight and readjusted her position before responding.

“I didn’t know another person’s body could feel so perfect against my own,” Claire spoke through the fabric of her pillow, muffling the words slightly. 

Vanessa slid the covers from her lover’s body and kissed the younger woman’s neck while rubbing the mound of her curvy ass.

“I guess we are just meant to be, then.”

Claire’s eyes flickered open and her pupils focused on Vanessa. She lifted her chin and met her new lover’s lips. The kiss was just as electric as the evening before.

“I’m going to get in the bath… join me?”

Claire pulled her body from the impossibly comfortable bed and forced her legs to stand up. Vanessa drank in the sight of her nude body, admiring each inch of the woman she now loved.

“I’ll be right there, darling. I have to make a few phone calls.”

Claire nodded and walked to the pink heart-shaped tub which sat in the middle of their room. She started running the water and testing it for temperature before slowly lowering herself into the chest-high water.

Vanessa had to keep herself from drooling as she watched the younger woman slide into the warm water. She longed to join her, but she knew she had more pressing issues at hand.

Vanessa got out of bed and covered her body with the luxurious robe that she and Claire couldn’t keep themselves from wearing. She grabbed her phone from the bedside table and unplugged it from her charger.

She shivered as she read the text from her pig of a husband.

“Hey honey. You must’ve been asleep when I called. Hope your night is nice. Call me when you can. xo”

Reading the words made her stomach churn. She no longer could deny her distaste for her husband, and now that she was finally happy and planning for her new life with Claire, she knew that she needed to lay the groundwork for their happily ever after.

She marveled at her beautiful partner as she turned on the jets and allowed the water to pulsate on her skin. She felt so incredibly lucky to know she would be spending the rest of her life alongside Claire. That fact gave her the courage to take the necessary next steps.

Vanessa took a deep breath to calm her nerves and dialed a number on her phone. It rang for several seconds before a man answered on the other end.

“Hi, Jerry. It’s Vanessa.”

Vanessa’s voice captured Claire’s attention and disrupted her from her soak. She watched as her lover paced back and forth in the motel room, talking to some person she had never heard her mention before.

“I am… amazing, thank you for asking.”

Vanessa smiled optimistically at Claire across the living room. Claire knew that she was referencing her as the source of her current mood. It made her heart swell.

Claire could hear the sound of the man’s muffled voice on the other end of the line, but she wasn’t able to make out any words.

“That’s so great to hear. I am calling with some unexpected news. I need you to draft up some divorce papers…”

Claire sat up in the tub and the water sloshed back and forth as the man on the other line spoke.

“Yes. No, it’s okay. It’s for the best. But listen, I need this done as soon as possible. Whatever we need to do to get him to sign. I already have everything I need.”

Vanessa smiled lovingly at Claire and the younger woman blushed with appreciation.

“Okay, great. Keep me posted. Talk soon.”

Vanessa hung up the phone and tossed it on the bed. She then quickly disrobed and headed to join Claire in the tub.

Claire drank in the sight of her mentor-turned-lover. 

“Wow. I can’t believe this is really happening,” the younger woman murmured, her eyes glued to her new lover’s nude body.

Vanessa smiled as she dipped a single toe into the water to test the heat.

“I don’t think I can spend another second not starting the rest of our life together,” she replied with a genuine, thoughtful smile.

Claire slid her body from one end of the tub to where Vanessa’s foot hovered. She kissed the older woman’s calf and massaged the heel of her foot.

“I love you, Vanessa.”

Vanessa lowered one foot into the tub and raised the other one over the edge to allow her to join Claire in the water.

“I love you, Claire.”

Vanessa lowered her body into the water and within seconds Claire wrapped her arms around her neck. She kissed her partner gently on the lips.

“How do you think your husband will take the news?” she asked between fervent kisses.

Vanessa shrugged. 

“I don’t know or care,” she replied, allowing herself to savor Claire’s attention. “Although I might need to stay with you for a couple weeks while we work out the details.”

Claire blushed at the thought of sharing a bed nightly with Vanessa, but reality quickly shook the fantasy loose.

“I live with my parents, babe. And I don’t think they would be too excited about me bringing home my 40-year-old girlfriend to move in,” Claire whispered into Vanessa’s lips and leaned in for a kiss.

But her lips were cut off by Vanessa’s finger. Claire’s eyes gave a look of confusion, as Vanessa teased her.

“First of all, I don’t turn 40 for two more months. Second of all, you never asked me to be your girlfriend.”

Claire tilted her head with an unamused stare.

“First of all, I don’t care how old you are, because I love you. Second — if you weren’t my girlfriend, would you let me do this?”

Claire’s hand left a ripple under the water as her fingers swam close to Vanessa’s submerged pussy. She delicately danced on the outside before rubbing her lover up and down on her slit.

Vanessa moaned and Claire captured the soundwaves with her own mouth.

As Claire continued to tease Vanessa under the water, the older woman spoke through shaky breaths.

“After we get out of the bath, and after I clean you off with my tongue, I can call my realtor,” she whispered through moans into Claire’s ear. “I have a nice little nest egg that we could use for a down payment on a place for us.”

Claire’s fingers left Vanessa’s aching pussy.

“Are you going to buy me my dream home?” she asked playfully.

Vanessa rolled her eyes and planted her lips on Claire’s.

“Any home is my dream home as long as you are there,” the older woman replied.

It was Claire’s turn to roll her eyes and interrupt her lover with a kiss. Claire was getting incredibly turned on by each conversation about their future. She darted her tongue in Vanessa’s mouth and her new partner greeted it happily. Vanessa sucked on Claire’s stiff tongue as the younger girl moved it in and out of her mouth.

“Buy me a mansion,” Claire whispered with a smile.

Vanessa shook her head lovingly.

“If we get a condo, we’ll have enough left over for the wedding.”

The words made Claire’s body go stiff. She separated from Vanessa and gave her an inquisitive look. They had only been girlfriends for the last minute, now they were talking about a wedding?

“Oh, I didn’t realize we were going to get married… you haven’t asked me, yet,” she teased.

Claire held her left hand up and pointed at her ring finger which was naked without an engagement ring.

Vanessa was desperate for Claire’s touch again and the thought of her lover not being her fiancée was burning up inside her.

She placed her hands on either side of the tub and abruptly jumped out, splashing water on the floor and giving Claire a closeup look at her bare ass. 

“Be right back.”

She ran to the far end of the suite where she grabbed her luggage from where she had thrown it the night before. She tossed it on the bed and began tearing it apart as she frantically searched for something.

After a minute of searching, her breasts and butt bouncing as she tore apart the bag, much to Claire’s amusement, she pulled out a small jade green box. 

Vanessa always traveled with a few different jewelry options, in case she needed to make an impromptu outfit change. She eyed one piece in particular and she grew impatient as she scoured through the box. 

Finally, after what felt like an eternity, she found it. A modest, golden ring with a tiny red stone. It belonged to her grandmother and Vanessa hadn’t worn it in years because it didn’t quite fit as comfortably as she liked. But as she inspected it, she imagined it would fit perfectly on Claire.

Vanessa removed her own wedding ring and placed it in the box, closed it, tossed it back into her luggage and jogged back to the tub where Claire continued to watch with undivided attention.

The older woman, now deeply, completely in love with her young protege, knew she couldn’t wait another second to have the woman as her partner for life.  She approached the end of the tub where Claire sat and dropped down to one knee until she was at eye level with the younger woman.

Claire’s heart was beating out of her chest, but there was no uncertainty. She knew what Vanessa was about to ask and she knew how she was going to answer. 

There was no doubt. They both wanted, needed this.

“Claire. I love you more than words can begin to describe,” Vanessa began, her voice shaky with emotion. “Would you please make me the happiest woman in the world by being my wife?”

Claire smiled at Vanessa and admired the vulnerability shown by the graceful older woman. Her heart was so full and it could only be destiny that they would realize they were in love in this crappy motel off the beaten path.

“Pending current litigation?” Claire said with a grin, unable to stop herself from making light of their vastly complicated situation.

Vanessa threw her head back in laughter. She loved her for that.  

“Yes, pending current litigation, would you be my wife?” she replied.

Claire extended from the porcelain of the tub and met Vanessa’s lips with her own.

“Nothing would make me happier, my love.”

Vanessa lifted her grandmother’s ring and slid it onto Claire’s wet fingers. It fit like a glove.

“It fits perfect,” Claire said with a smile, admiring the simple engagement ring.

“I guess it was just meant to be, then,” Vanessa responded.

She kissed Claire’s lips for the first time as her fiancée. She couldn’t wait to begin their life together. Buying a home, getting married, fucking for eternity. 

She had experienced those before, but she had never experienced it while in love, at least not love like she had with Claire.

“Now hurry up and get back in the tub, baby,” Claire whispered seductively as she pulled away. “Your fiancée is horny.”

She didn’t need to be told twice.

Vanessa quickly rejoined Claire in the tub and immediately inserted two fingers into her fiancée’s wet pussy. She pumped in and out of Claire while kissing her neck and leaving a rough hickey. She didn’t care if she left a mark — she was marking her territory. 

Claire was hers.

After a whirlwind two hours of the women fucking different orifices, finding new positions to try and rehashing some of their favorite moves from the night before, the two women settled back onto the couch where it all began. Sheer exhaustion was the only thing that could stop them fucking like bunnies.

They sat in their red velvet robes and kissed lovingly, zoning out as another obscure romantic comedy played out on the screen. Something about the robes and the motel room made them unable to keep their hands off each other.

“What if your kids don’t like me?” Claire asked, her voice shaky and her genuine concern palpable.

Vanessa planted a kiss on her lips to calm the nerves of her gorgeous fiancée.

“I fell in love with you in an instant. They’ll love you, too. They are our kids after all… if that’s okay with you.”

The thought of marrying Vanessa filled Claire with joy, but she hadn’t considered that it meant she would be a stepmother as well. But there was no fear. As she looked into her lover’s eyes she felt reassured. 

She was going to be a mother. 

It was something she always assumed would eventually happen, but she never expected to want it as much as she did now. Claire and Vanessa raising children together was all she ever wanted.

“As long as we can have a couple of our own, I’ll be happy,” she replied, her tongue twirling with Vanessa’s as they lazily swapped spit.

Divorce. Engagement. Homeownership. Marriage. Maybe a pregnancy. They were going to do it all, and Vanessa couldn’t wait to get started. 

It was all happening so fast, but simultaneously not fast enough.

“Whatever you want, my love. Forever and always,” the older woman replied. 

Vanessa’s eyes shimmered at the thought of growing her family with the love of her life. How could she have gotten so lucky, she wondered?

Claire snuggled into Vanessa and their attention returned to the movie playing in front of them. Slowly their strength returned to them and, during a steamy love scene, they could feel their own sexual tension building.

But before Vanessa could find the energy for another round of lovemaking, her phone buzzed on the bedside table on the other side of the room. 

It had been buzzing for hours, and Vanessa figured it was time to check in with the real world. 

She kissed Claire on the forehead and got up to check the source of the alert.

She grabbed the phone and scrolled past the dozens of angry, confused and upset texts from her husband. 

Instead, staring at the weather alert that had popped up. She read it and smiled and turned to face Claire. 

“Storm’s getting worse. The highway is shut down. Looks like we’re staying another night.”

Claire cocked an eyebrow, knowing what was in store for the two lovebirds this evening.

She tied her robe and walked to the hotel phone on her side of the bed.

“I wonder if the front desk has any champagne,” she said with a grin. “We are celebrating, after all.”

Claire winked at Vanessa as she dialed the phone.

“I like that idea, my love… also ask if we can book the honeymoon suite again in a few weeks. This time for the real deal.”