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Find of the century (Patreon)

Published:
2024-04-15 18:18:47
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2026-06
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Just finished writing this story. Its about 2300 words long, and contains themes of mind control, aware control, and m/f.

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Cormag81

Not bad though I kind of wish we got to see what he does with the stone after he accepted his new status. Either way he chooses is fine, the story just feels a little incomplete where it sits now

Changer

Yeah, deciding where to end it was tricky for this one. This spot leaves it open ended, which isn't necessarily a bad thing, but there are some lingering questions such as "Would he get away with not destroying it" etc. that don't work as well open ended. It might need to be expanded to be a multi-part story if there is enough interest in where it goes?

Cormag81

I would enjoy another chapter though I feel him keeping the relic might lead to a similar place as "whatever you say" only instead of a collage it's a dig site. Though the relic us significantly more limited to scope to the flash from that story

Arbietud

Would love a next chapter, it separates itself a little from Whatever you say by the women being semi-automonous from the protagonist, but still under the influence of the stone. Like for example Carter subtely struggling not to but still ending up stripping her panties off without hers or sam's knowledge. And the second chapter screams sex scene which I would love to see, but that is besides the point. ^^