Detective Doe 01: Bimbo Blues (Patreon)

Here is the full text-included version of Detective Doe 01. I've uploaded it in three versions; a textless image set, a text image set, and a pdf.

Any feedback will be greatly appreciated. This is our first comic book, so there may be some things we could have done better. We'll be keeping our ears open for feedback to improve the process for book 2.