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Jon Richardson

Tim, I don't think that "it could it be" is grammatically correct. You might might consider dropping one of the "it"'s.

Brian Dickens

Also, the last speech bubble in the bottom panel has "... why they'v held..." -- There's an 'e' missing there. Sorry for us pointing out grammar and spelling mistakes, Tim. ;)