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Monday Comic Edit (Patreon)

Published:
2019-03-04 03:15:18
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2026-06
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Okay, I'm not in love with the original version, and I think I like the way this one is framed a little better.

It feels like it makes more sense (I think I created a metaphor disconnect in the original re: why I'm talking about loot drops but showing cookies and broccoli), and this one also makes the whole thing a little less obvious from the get-go.

Happy to listen to feedback though.

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Shawn Spencer

The changes seem mostly superfluous, except for the Titling. Changing the title seems like it would aim more specifically at Anthem players, since they're the only ones likely to make the connection between "dessert" and "Loot drops".

Stephanie Rockfield

I'm on the same boat - the first version was easier to follow and could apply to multiple games with loot systems though clearly the joke was Anthem's terrible loot. With this updated version, I wouldn't have understood you were talking about loot boxes if I hadn't seen the prior version. Of course you get the creator's override on this, but if voting counts I would say the original way you had it is better ^_^