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Oni and the Farmer Ch. 20 (Patreon)

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2019-03-16 04:36:17
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Content

Finally!

From a no-sex chapter to what might be considered a stroke chapter. Lol!

First taste, Bathtime fun, First night, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5VRr9NG7RE0

Enjoy!

Blu


Comments

Nicholas Kratzer

Great chapter over all! A "Stroke Chapter" definitely describes it. I noticed two small writing/grammar issues right at the beginning that I wanted to point out. In the first paragraph, it says “The only tense moment was” and then two sentences later in paragraph two it says “Kal’s only mishap was”. This is odd and awkward wording to me. While an tense moment and a mishap are technically two different things, I feel it should really be “The first tense moment” etc or just be worded completely differently. Just my opinion, but it stood out to me as sounding weird. Also, in paragraph 3, there is a missing “ when Ikuno says “Do I need to worry” in the second half of the paragraph. That's all I noticed editing wise, though I may have just been distracted the rest of the chapter by all the great sex.

BluDraygn

Hmm, will check that out when I get a chance to. I'm elbows deep in Chapter 21 at the moment so I want to focus on that for now, though I do appreciate the heads up. Those two phrases do sound awkward so close together. Me, MS Word, Grammarly, Old Fart, how the hell does a missing quotation mark manage to make it through four layers of checks... Lol!