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Old fart had some issues with ye olde internets, hence being a day later than expected. He received  it earlier today and got it back to me this afternoon so I'm not complaining.

Heading back home tomorrow from visiting my family up north, so hopefully I'll be able to get clicking away at Ch 5 on Sunday.


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BluDraygn

Not at all Tyler, I was merely confused. As I think I mentioned the fault lies with me. The transition is seamless for me because I'm the one writing it but I did a poor job, or non-existent job at first, of setting up the flashback. It does feel like this chapter is very busy. Well... I suppose it is, there's a ton going on and it's one of my longest chapters. If there is anything that needs better description or clarification as to what's happening let me know. I really don't want to use my patrons as a test audience, I'd rather be putting out a finalized product, but things get missed and sometimes what is going on in my head doesn't get translated well to the paper. I'm not above making corrections or revisions to make sure my patrons are getting good content.

AmnChode

Another great chapter and nice spot to leave Kal hanging, so to speak ;)